GUYS! I AM STOCK! Should ı send the new chapter that already 16 pages or write more?

Should ı send the new chapter that already 16 pages or write more?


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Alicerty789

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As an new user for this site ı start to write my book also sended the chapter one of it but... I am stock so can you guys help?
 

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ak47_1511

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Hey, could you take a look at a part of my book? It's a mix of action and drama, with illustrations that pull you in. If possible, I'd love some feedback.
 

Hoshino

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wait until 30 or 50 and then slowly upload 1 - 2 chapters daily, nya.
 

OniKaniki

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16 pages? how many words was it? you should finish half of your books first before send them. if you had already send them, then well, just send it i guess?
 

DireBadger

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I think maybe you should try learning English before you contribute any more to an English writing site.
 

DireBadger

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Try surviving on Durian for a while.

No writer is good without understanding pain.
 

Alicerty789

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I think maybe you should try learning English before you contribute any more to an English writing site.
Okay mate its making me sad now that you assume that i have like poor skills for languages but trust me i am learning 3 languages at once so can you be a little nice i mean??????
Try surviving on Durian for a while.

No writer is good without understanding pain.
İ know right... The Bird can't fly without experiencing the fall once
Keep going until the alcoholism kicks in.
İ am... Not into these stuff but... Thanks for Advice i mean ?
Stock? On what index?
Pardon me my text keep getting disturbed by this fricking Google... Haaaa anyway so yeah i am sorry for misunderstanding
 
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ArborealWood

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I think maybe you should try learning English before you contribute any more to an English writing site.
I mean...didn't this fella repeat the same thing like a few days or month ago? I'm preety sure it's a bot...
 

DireBadger

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I mean...didn't this fella repeat the same thing like a few days or month ago? I'm preety sure it's a bot...
who?
Okay mate its making me sad now that you assume that i have like poor skills for languages but trust me i am learning 3 languages at once so can you be a little nice i mean??????

I don't care.

You are speaking MY language badly. Understanding for your predicament doesn't mean I need to accept your writing poorly in MY language. If you want to write well, write in your own language, and then distribute it on sites where your mastery of the language is unquestioned.

With your poor english, you honestly should not be trying to distribute poorly written english works. Have a little pride, man. LEARN english to the point where you can speak and write it well, THEN distribute English works.

Your demands that other people 'be nice' while maiming what we take pride in mastering? seriously? that's like telling a chef who only knows how to cook mexican food that he is amazing when he maims a pizza. Your English writing sucks serious ass. Get better, and don't get upset for those of us who have made it OUR specialty call attention to your failure.

I speak 4 languages as well, and guess what? I would NEVER try to write a book in Russian, because I know my Russian is not GOOD enough to make the attempt yet. This is one of the hardest lessons a writer has to learn... you need to master a language before you can use it as a medium for art.
 
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ArborealWood

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who?


I don't care.

You are speaking MY language badly. Understanding for your predicament doesn't mean I need to accept your writing poorly in MY language. If you want to write well, write in your own language, and then distribute it on sites where your mastery of the language is unquestioned.

With your poor english, you honestly should not be trying to distribute poorly written english works. Have a little pride, man. LEARN english to the point where you can speak and write it well, THEN distribute English works.

Your demands that other people 'be nice' while maiming what we take pride in mastering? seriously? that's like telling a chef who only knows how to cook mexican food that he is amazing when he maims a pizza. Your English writing sucks serious ass. Get better, and don't get upset for those of us who have made it OUR specialty call attention to your failure.

I speak 4 languages as well, and guess what? I would NEVER try to write a book in Russian, because I know my Russian is not GOOD enough to make the attempt yet. This is one of the hardest lessons a writer has to learn... you need to master a language before you can use it as a medium for art.
Like if you click the op profile and check he just keep copy pasting the same thing periodically maybe once every few weeks or something so I think its very much a bot albeit...a shit one.
 

Alicerty789

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I don't care.

You are speaking MY language badly. Understanding for your predicament doesn't mean I need to accept your writing poorly in MY language. If you want to write well, write in your own language, and then distribute it on sites where your mastery of the language is unquestioned.

With your poor english, you honestly should not be trying to distribute poorly written english works. Have a little pride, man. LEARN english to the point where you can speak and write it well, THEN distribute English works.

Your demands that other people 'be nice' while maiming what we take pride in mastering? seriously? that's like telling a chef who only knows how to cook mexican food that he is amazing when he maims a pizza. Your English writing sucks serious ass. Get better, and don't get upset for those of us who have made it OUR specialty call attention to your failure.

I speak 4 languages as well, and guess what? I would NEVER try to write a book in Russian, because I know my Russian is not GOOD enough to make the attempt yet. This is one of the hardest lessons a writer has to learn... you need to master a language before you can use it as a medium for art.
Okay so you don't have to be this rude right now its like that text is cursing at me right now so i just find it uncomfortable can you atleast be more polite and i didn't say i am learning 3 languages at once for showing my skills okay? İ just did say that hope you understand that i can't just write everything perfectly in an order because its just messing with other languages and making me a bit unprofessinal but if you want to be this rude to me then just don't write anything either i didn't come here to see your rude ass answear you know? Sorry but if you just doesn't like it then don't care anyways Because you know what... İ wouldnt either and i will not, also if you seeing this answear to your "criticism" then just read it and hopefully just sit still and if you don't i don't care about your presistent of YOUR LANGUAGE that you are gonna write also will not answear to your ridiculous rude ass answear again... But thank you for your time i guess
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I don't care.

You are speaking MY language badly. Understanding for your predicament doesn't mean I need to accept your writing poorly in MY language. If you want to write well, write in your own language, and then distribute it on sites where your mastery of the language is unquestioned.

With your poor english, you honestly should not be trying to distribute poorly written english works. Have a little pride, man. LEARN english to the point where you can speak and write it well, THEN distribute English works.

Your demands that other people 'be nice' while maiming what we take pride in mastering? seriously? that's like telling a chef who only knows how to cook mexican food that he is amazing when he maims a pizza. Your English writing sucks serious ass. Get better, and don't get upset for those of us who have made it OUR specialty call attention to your failure.

I speak 4 languages as well, and guess what? I would NEVER try to write a book in Russian, because I know my Russian is not GOOD enough to make the attempt yet. This is one of the hardest lessons a writer has to learn... you need to master a language before you can use it as a medium for art.
What in the nine hells did I just read...?
İ know i write stuck like "stock" but mate please just a text failing nothing more?
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I don't care.

You are speaking MY language badly. Understanding for your predicament doesn't mean I need to accept your writing poorly in MY language. If you want to write well, write in your own language, and then distribute it on sites where your mastery of the language is unquestioned.

With your poor english, you honestly should not be trying to distribute poorly written english works. Have a little pride, man. LEARN english to the point where you can speak and write it well, THEN distribute English works.

Your demands that other people 'be nice' while maiming what we take pride in mastering? seriously? that's like telling a chef who only knows how to cook mexican food that he is amazing when he maims a pizza. Your English writing sucks serious ass. Get better, and don't get upset for those of us who have made it OUR specialty call attention to your failure.

I speak 4 languages as well, and guess what? I would NEVER try to write a book in Russian, because I know my Russian is not GOOD enough to make the attempt yet. This is one of the hardest lessons a writer has to learn... you need to master a language before you can use it as a medium for art.
And also did you even read my book chapter for once? Try it maybe you find a clue about "HOW TO MAKE THİS ANSWEAR RUDE AS WELL AND TRY TO RUDE TO EVERYONE ELSE"
 
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DireBadger

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Not impressing me by quoting me three times. And yes, I am rude when I find people mangling a language I take great pride in expressing. It's as bad as racism or culturalism. And yes, I started reading your... creation, and it was the linguistic equivalent of bad fingerprinting. I am not cursing at you, no matter what you try to express, I am telling you to GO BACK AND TRY AGAIN when you learn how my language works. Right now, your 'products' insult those who take pride in writing in their native tongue.
 

Joyager2

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Not impressing me by quoting me three times. And yes, I am rude when I find people mangling a language I take great pride in expressing. It's as bad as racism or culturalism. And yes, I started reading your... creation, and it was the linguistic equivalent of bad fingerprinting. I am not cursing at you, no matter what you try to express, I am telling you to GO BACK AND TRY AGAIN when you learn how my language works. Right now, your 'products' insult those who take pride in writing in their native tongue.
This is such an insane thing to say
 
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