Watch the movie; Equilibrium.... I guess the problem is, I have no idea how to write gun-related combat. I've mostly dabbled in hand-to-hand, so even melee weapon writing is foreign to me though I feel like I could pick that up easily...but guns?
Sorry I rambled big time here.
THISAnd for the sake of all the gun-fanatics that WILL be reading your story, Do Your Research!!!
Gods... I HATE when an author doesn't bother with the research because they think their readers Won't Know.THIS
I was excited about blue steel blasphemer but then it became apparent that the author had no idea about guns. Just threw terms around that were gun-ish like sprinkling toppings on an action scene.
That would require me to research the laws of physics as it pertains to guns and so on...which I am EXTREMELY unwilling to do. The furthest I got into the sciences in school was Biology 101. I was bored to tears and slept through the majority of the class. I passed with a B- ONLY because I wrote damn good essays and reports.You could always take the route Zelazny did in Chronicles of Amber or Silverburg did in Guardians of the Flame and just rewrite the laws of physics so that the guns don't work the same way (jeweler's rouge in one case, and a chemical that explodes when wet in the other)
Change that to A- and you have 90% of my high school career... if you Add in "takes tests well" too... Heck, that skill almost landed me a job in Chicago that would have paid more than I've ever made before or since - was tested on Microsoft Access from having spent about ten hours working with the code (total not "per day or per project") and about two hundred hours fixing broken search strings to function correctly over two years, I had the second highest score they had seen at that point, and the highest was from a guy who had been a Access Beta Tester and worked with it daily for six years (and HE had scored two points above the minimum for a pass, while I was eight - out of, IIRC three hundred - short of passing)That would require me to research the laws of physics as it pertains to guns and so on...which I am EXTREMELY unwilling to do. The furthest I got into the sciences in school was Biology 101. I was bored to tears and slept through the majority of the class. I passed with a B- ONLY because I wrote damn good essays and reports.