Great Idea #2

[PrinceDinero]

Hey besties, so I've been in the kitchen ✨️ cooking and I came up with another great idea for a story. Of course it's free to use as always but make sure to tattoo my username on your forehead if you do decide to use it. Also I apologize for any grammar or formatting mistakes (I will not be fixing them)

So the idea is something I've been thinking of for a long time and I kinda wanted to get it off my chest. I feel as if this kind of story isn't really told that often so I feel a great deal of responsibility in bringing it to light.

The story is about cool dudes with cool powers fighting. There is no plot or dialogue. This narrative is important to bring into today's Disney driven society because oftentimes we're overwhelmed with quippy jokes or relatable characters when what we really want is cool fights, therfore my idea seeks to fix this issue.

Let me know if I cooked if you have any ideas to make my idea any better feel free to share.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

Uh...huh...?

 

[Sola-sama]

Who let this guy cook?

 

[SsemouyOnan]

I demote you to dishwashing duty, never cook again.

 

[Ellieporter]

Huh???

 

[Iamnotabot]

Ok i'm not letting you cook again, you burn the kitchen

 

[TheEldritchGod]

Huh. Well my idea is:
I'm currently working on part of my story about a guy who winds up half-demon. He accidentally finds himself summoned and bound by an emo girl who has the power to control him. She offers to finally send him back home (it is her power and he's been trying for a while.) She just needs him to do one thing.

Kill Everyone In Her High School.

Yup, I'm turning my Half-Demon MC into a school shooter against his will. Did I mention that his biggest regret is the death of his wife and daughter and murdering a whole bunch of children would basically be his worst nightmare? The man who nearly killed himself and detonated an entire castle just to save one little girl will have to kill hundreds if he can't figure out a way to get the bullied kid who has him bound to change her mind and NOT order the death of all the kids who tortured her for years.

TEE HEE!

But your idea? Just write mindless violence without even the pretense of story, dialog, or character development? Hmmm... Yeah. That beats mine. Let's go with that one.

 

[APieceOfRock]

Nel timido soffio del vento
Al nuovo sorriso del sol
Si scopre la valle dorata
Incanto d'anima e cor
Sentiero ce ormai ti nascondi
Rivela la via che fu
Tra quercia, castano ed abete
Al nostro passo silente
Odori sfumati nel senso
Colori ormai senza eta'
Tra resine ed erbe inebrianti
Tra ombra e verita'
Leggiadra visione di sogno
E di parallela realta'
Transcendi l'umana coscienza
Pacando il mio fiero ardore

 

[Prince_Azmiran_Myrian]

Say his name.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

You can use my toddler as one of the characters.

 

[georgelee5786]

No, no, I like this. let him cook some more

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Jesse, you don't cook in one of these.

 

[Syringe]

 

[PrinceDinero]

Who let this guy cook?

The head chef himself:

I demote you to dishwashing duty, never cook again.

I will always cook, cooking is in my nature just like say gex ??

Ok i'm not letting you cook again, you burn the kitchen

You don't see the vision bro trust me it's literally genius (I have an iq of 53000)

 

[HelloHound]

dude the stove ain't even on here

 

[Deleted member 84247]

dude the stove ain't even on here

The dudes are lighting it with the sparks of their fight scene.

 

[J_Chemist]

Man's in Home Depot at one of those mock kitchens with a Play-Doh set.

Help him.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Man's in Home Depot at one of those mock kitchens with a Play-Doh set.

Help him.

Man thought the displays would turn on when they weren't plugged in.

 

[Kalliel]

Bro cooked a perfect nothing burger.

 

[Jemini]

Hey besties, so I've been in the kitchen ✨️ cooking and I came up with another great idea for a story. Of course it's free to use as always but make sure to tattoo my username on your forehead if you do decide to use it. Also I apologize for any grammar or formatting mistakes (I will not be fixing them)

So the idea is something I've been thinking of for a long time and I kinda wanted to get it off my chest. I feel as if this kind of story isn't really told that often so I feel a great deal of responsibility in bringing it to light.

The story is about cool dudes with cool powers fighting. There is no plot or dialogue. This narrative is important to bring into today's Disney driven society because oftentimes we're overwhelmed with quippy jokes or relatable characters when what we really want is cool fights, therfore my idea seeks to fix this issue.

Let me know if I cooked if you have any ideas to make my idea any better feel free to share.

Well... I would like to say that people who give huge lead-ups like this to present an idea they keep trying to sell as good tend to actually be horrible ideas, but... this is literally what Wildbow did in his Worm series. AKA, the 2011 series that is STILL in the top 3 web-fictions listings even today, over a decade after it was written.

It made a note of the protagonist frequently making internal-monologue comments about how she's not good at quips or banter, so she just stays silent during her fights outside of what she needs to do to relay instructions to comrades or try to use "Talk-no-jutsu" Vs. her opponents to negotiate them down from attacking.