GIVE ME A REVIEW OF MY SOON TO BE 500 CHAPTER SAGA

[SenseiHusky]

Hey guys ! Rate this out if you can and what you think about its potential https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2154417/arc---the-blue-dragon/

 

[Xcalibur_Xc]

Stop promoting your books in the author's general. There's a story feedback thread just below. And as for rate and review of your book, it's AI slop. You simply copy pasted it from gpt. If you are writing something put some effort into it instead of copy pasting AI slop.

 

[Peagreene]

Stop promoting your books in the author's general. There's a story feedback thread just below. And as for rate and review of your book, it's AI slop. You simply copy pasted it from gpt. If you are writing something put some effort into it instead of copy pasting AI slop.

How can you tell it's AI?

 

[Failnot]

How can you tell it's AI?

AI uses a specific format in all its writing. There's the obvious recurring stuff like em dashes, the "it's not x, it's y", the groups of threes, but also some stuff I can't really put into words. But, it's easy to tell if you've ever tried to use AI for anything before in most cases

Of course, it's not really definitive. Maybe the guy just writes like this, or his story is translated by AI from another language

 

[Peagreene]

AI uses a specific format in all its writing. There's the obvious recurring stuff like em dashes, the "it's not x, it's y", the groups of threes, but also some stuff I can't really put into words. But, it's easy to tell if you've ever tried to use AI for anything before in most cases

Of course, it's not really definitive. Maybe the guy just writes like this, or his story is translated by AI from another language

Dammit, I hope it's the latter. AI is a fucking scourge on the earth. I've never used it to write anything so I'm not aware of its tells.

 

[Failnot]

Dammit, I hope it's the latter. AI is a fucking scourge on the earth. I've never used it to write anything so I'm not aware of its tells.

Giving people the benefit of the doubt is always nice

 

[CountVanBadger]

I'm still not going to read it due to the tone deafness of the advertisement. Your story has three chapters and two "bonus scenes," and you're marketing it as having close to 500 chapters.

 

[JordanIda]

How do you tell if it's AI slop? Read it. Sheesh.

One doesn't have to read the whole thing. GPT typically ghosts itself within two to three column inches.

 

[TinaMigarlo]

I question how clear of a vision you have for your own story, when you're asking people what to do next. Hey, which character do you want me to give more screen time to? Vote on it! 911 words to the first chapter, then we vote and tell you what to do next.

no comment. not my thing.

 

[L1aei]

How do you tell if it's AI slop? Read it. Sheesh.

One doesn't have to read the whole thing. GPT typically ghosts itself within two to three column inches.

Gemini too.

 

[FabsVibes]

AI uses a specific format in all its writing. There's the obvious recurring stuff like em dashes, the "it's not x, it's y", the groups of threes, but also some stuff I can't really put into words. But, it's easy to tell if you've ever tried to use AI for anything before in most cases

Of course, it's not really definitive. Maybe the guy just writes like this, or his story is translated by AI from another language

Thanks to you I discovers how shitty my work was being translated so I will take a few days to fix it alone, it changed like half of the words I wrote in italian, switching them with overcomplicated junk, no wonder it sucked so hard

 

[L1aei]

Thanks to you I discovers how shitty my work was being translated so I will take a few days to fix it alone, it changed like half of the words I wrote in italian, switching them with overcomplicated junk, no wonder it sucked so hard

What LLM (AI platform or model) did you use for it to be that bad?

 

[FabsVibes]

Gemini, but hell if it sucks

Gemini, but hell if it sucks

but well, it's on me, I should have checked it better instead of trusting the proofreading of friends

 

[L1aei]

Gemini, but hell if it sucks

Yeah... Gemini is good with memory, keeping this consistent, but other than that? Look, I don't know for sure, but there are a pair of editors who are freely offering their services to help writers. Maybe check with them in seeing if they also can help with your translation? Just a suggestion.

 

[SenseiHusky]

Stop promoting your books in the author's general. There's a story feedback thread just below. And as for rate and review of your book, it's AI slop. You simply copy pasted it from gpt. If you are writing something put some effort into it instead of copy pasting AI slop.

I didnt bro iswtg, english is not my language so I just used it to refine my grammer

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I'm still not going to read it due to the tone deafness of the advertisement. Your story has three chapters and two "bonus scenes," and you're marketing it as having close to 500 chapters.

It has a huge plot which i cant spoil. It has biblical refrences as well as mythological refrences.

 

[Alski]

iswtg

Urban dictionary had fun with that one.

 

[Wamba2K]

Hey guys ! Rate this out if you can and what you think about its potential https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2154417/arc---the-blue-dragon/

I thought it was kind of boring, to be honest. I feel like there isn't enough happening, and what is happening is confusing and difficult to track. I'd suggest trying to improve your... everything, really.

 

[Makimaam]

There is a difference between asking ai to translate your work and asking ai to rewrite it. I’ve read many llm translations, and they are generally readable because llms prioritize keeping the phrasing close to the original. When you ask GenAi to rewrite your sentences, that’s when their sloppy signature tendencies show through and in your case, OP, it’s the latter.

 

[SenseiHusky]

I thought it was kind of boring, to be honest. I feel like there isn't enough happening, and what is happening is confusing and difficult to track. I'd suggest trying to improve your... everything, really.

Thank you. I have been making chapter 10. I ama ctuly making the start kind of simple so i can gain readers rather than getting them abandoned.

 

[Wamba2K]

Thank you. I have been making chapter 10. I ama ctuly making the start kind of simple so i can gain readers rather than getting them abandoned.

You're welcome? I ama ctuly confused with what you're thanking me for. Anyway, I think readers would be more invested in a less simple start. Readers generally like having something to latch onto, something interesting. That's what will get you return readers, at least in my experience.