Getting your acts together.

[gaylolis]

whenever i'm down, i kinda just open up a blank document and chat with my imaginary friends.

it made me realize that i'm into characters that may look extremely evil but are real kind inside and most importantly, turns me on.

 

[BenJepheneT]

I fucking hate gaming laptops.
Today when I walked into my economics class I saw something I dread every time I close my eyes. Someone had brought their new gaming laptop to class. The Forklift he used to bring it was still running idle at the back. I started sweating as I sat down and gazed over at the 700lb beast that was his laptop. He had already reinforced his desk with steel support beams and was in the process of finding an outlet for a power cable thicker than Amy Schumer's thigh. I start shaking. I keep telling myself I'm going to be alright and that there's nothing to worry about. He somehow finds a fucking outlet. Tears are running down my cheeks as I send my last texts to my family saying I love them. The teacher starts the lecture, and the student turns his laptop on. The colored lights on his RGB Backlit keyboard flare to life like a nuclear flash, and a deep humming fills my ears and shakes my very soul. The entire city power grid goes dark. The classroom begins to shake as the massive fans begin to spin. In mere seconds my world has gone from vibrant life, to a dark, earth shattering void where my body is getting torn apart by the 150mph gale force winds and the 500 decibel groan of the cooling fans. As my body finally surrenders, I weep, as my school and my city go under. I fucking hate gaming laptops.

this is just another version of cats being afraid of cucumbers but made cyberpunk

whenever i'm down, i kinda just open up a blank document and chat with my imaginary friends.

it made me realize that i'm into characters that may look extremely evil but are real kind inside and most importantly, turns me on.

i break your leg now, not so you can't escape but so that you won't feel leg pain anymore (since you can't feel anything else UwU)

 

[Shiver]

I know, wrong place to post this, even more so if I decided to post in NUF so... yeah.

No mood to continue writing the dumpster fire that is my work, haven't post it up so I can lessen the 1* blows first.

E and N hentai have no inspiration for me. Same in Literotica and Storiesonline.

I remembered why I stop going into AO3 for porn, all those weird shits JESUS!

So give me your lamest post if you will, I would just give a free like for those who post in this thread, if I bothered to remember that I created this thread.

TLDR This is a shit thread, feel free to just report spam or pointless.

I haven't read you, but I've been writing for a while and all I can tell you is that you should try and ignore the star rating system.
1 & 2 star basically mean dislike, 3, 4 & 5 stars are basically likes. Of the 13 ratings of your work, you have 9 likes and 4 dislikes.
If you need something heartening; think about it as approval rating. You've got one of almost 70%. Which is a shitload better than most polititians have.

But when you get down to it, a star rating gives you nothing to improve with.
It's the comments that take the time to tell you what they specifically liked, or didn't like, and why, that you should take more seriously. They're the ones that you'd be better off with spending your energy on deciding if they're usefull and will help you improve.
Not someone who took 0.3 seconds to press a button to tell you they disliked something about the 122k words you posted.

just m2c.

 

[NotaNuffian]

I haven't read you, but I've been writing for a while and all I can tell you is that you should try and ignore the star rating system.
1 & 2 star basically mean dislike, 3, 4 & 5 stars are basically likes. Of the 13 ratings of your work, you have 9 likes and 4 dislikes.
If you need something heartening; think about it as approval rating. You've got one of almost 70%. Which is a shitload better than most polititians have.

But when you get down to it, a star rating gives you nothing to improve with.
It's the comments that take the time to tell you what they specifically liked, or didn't like, and why, that you should take more seriously. They're the ones that you'd be better off with spending your energy on deciding if they're usefull and will help you improve.
Not someone who took 0.3 seconds to press a button to tell you they disliked something about the 122k words you posted.

just m2c.

Cuz I not yet posted. Still stockpiling the dumpster fire.

 

[Shiver]

Cuz I not yet posted. Still stockpiling the dumpster fire.

Argh, I'm a twit and opened up Benjephinet's novel thinking it was yours.

 

[Maple-Leaf]

i'm into characters that may look extremely evil but are real kind inside and most importantly, turns me on.

See, the opposite is what I go for.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

I like porn.