Free feedback

[AdOtherwise]

I don't really do smut I mentioned that before

This is a big one I can't really give you a general feedback if it is okay with you I plan on a detailed chapterwise feedback and suggestions

That would be fine, I'm happy to get feedback in any way. Thank you in advance

 

[Rookieqw]

Thank you for the kind offer.

If this is okay, I would like to know why this story is bad:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1042505/hordedoom/

No need to sugarcoat your words; I am seeking to learn and improve, and knowing why my writing sucks can (maybe), help with that.

 

[FirnielMahalayati]

Would I even be able to quantify for this, given I only have 3 chapters up so far?

still gonna put the link here anyways: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/

 

[SOA]

Hi! I’m offering free feedback for your stories! Feel free to share them for an honest review and suggestions.

No BL,smut or sports

I'm down if you want to give my story a shot.

 

[Jun_Sakazuki]

Hi! I’m offering free feedback for your stories! Feel free to share them for an honest review and suggestions.

No BL,smut or sports

Am I still able to share my stories for feedback?Through The Last Eye