Yesterday at 1:03 AMGuess I didn't post my story link here. So, here you go
The Truth is Mysterious
The four princesses are trying to solve a mystery together. The path won't be an easy one and they will have to confront so many obstacles. While trying to unravel the mystery, they will meet their destinied partners and some untold truths. However, they will unravel the truth behind all...www.scribblehub.com
Aha-ha. I didn't notice.
Thanks so much for your time! Here's the link to the young adult romance novel that I've been working on: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1103253/call-it-what-you-want/Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(?), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel.
All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.
Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.
The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).
Ah, okay, sorry to bother you.
please review mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...-ability-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(?), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel
All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.
Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.
The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).
shucks, that's too bad.Free feedback thread.
Would it be okay if there is there is a gay joke? If yes, I would like to give mine a try https://www.scribblehub.com/series/906410/to-the-roots-of-akasha/ My writing is bad, so I'd like the review in PM. Thank you very muchforum.scribblehub.com
I think this thread isn't active anymore. However, someone else was doing story review too:I Became A Starter Beast
They say that life can suddenly turn interesting. For me that's true, of course it would if you got hit by a truck and just as you think that it's the end, you found yourself woken up in an unfamiliar place. I got reincarnated. Period. However, not in a way...
Message plsss
That's really sad. I posted one, but after reading the critique I think I'll just stick with chatgpt, lol.
I'd like a review if you have the time, private message please.Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(?), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel
All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.
Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.
The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).
Oh well, thanks for letting me know.