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If the flashbacks are going to be long spread them outXNPC's main character more or less enters the story in the middle. To him, everything is brand new, but everybody else has been living in this reality for over a decade. There are things that happened in the past that are going to effect him, but rather than just have the other characters exposit it to him, I decided to actually show these things happening as flashback chapters. Right now there are eight of these chapters, and there's going to be another two or three by the time the book's finished.
How would you rather this go? Have all the flashback chapters together, or spread them out through the book? Right now I'm leaning toward spreading them out so that my readers won't feel like I'm keeping them away from the main plot for too long, but I'd also understand if they'd prefer to just get them over with.