First time writer looking for feedback

[Kvairax]

Hi! I am a newbie here and looking for feedback for my first attempt in writing stories
Shadows of the Silver Flower

Thank you!

 

[AmbreaTaddy]

I can't really read your story (if I read something when I'm writing, I'll get lost in my ideas), but I can tell you something : The title is too generic. I know at least 5 books with the title 'flowers and blood'. Type that title in google and you wil see