First time posting, would love some feedback!

[QuillThePen]

Hi! This is my first time writing anything serious, and I really want to receive some more feedback. I've had other people review it, but they don't read very often and have given me very basic feedback. I only have 5 chapters posted, but I have others already scheduled.

Beneath The Wizards Hat

“Where there be crows, bad luck follows.” Centuries ago, the world changed. Civilization reclaimed the globe from the monsters that once ruled it—werewolves, ghosts, cultists, mad scientists, vampires, and more were driven back, banished to the edges of society. Yet one figure still loomed...

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[K_Nishi]

Hi! This is my first time writing anything serious, and I really want to receive some more feedback. I've had other people review it, but they don't read very often and have given me very basic feedback. I only have 5 chapters posted, but I have others already scheduled.

Beneath The Wizards Hat

“Where there be crows, bad luck follows.” Centuries ago, the world changed. Civilization reclaimed the globe from the monsters that once ruled it—werewolves, ghosts, cultists, mad scientists, vampires, and more were driven back, banished to the edges of society. Yet one figure still loomed...

www.scribblehub.com

Then how about giving each other feedback?
My story is only four chapters long, so I think you can read it quickly.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1951876/leo-the-archmage-of-blazing-flamescompleted/

 

[K_Nishi]

Alright then, I’ll read it so I can leave a review.