First Person Or Third Person?

TheBestofSome

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Can you share where it was done well? I would like to read something in that tense, but what I have found here was subpar at best :blob_hide:
Unfortunately, I don't remember where I saw it. But if you wait for an indeterminate period of time, you'll be able to see my stab at it in the aforementioned story idea. :blob_teehee:
I made a second person future tense thread before, and that was pretty funny.
Links or it didn't happen. :blobspearpeek:
 
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Unfortunately, I don't remember where I saw it. But if you wait for an indeterminate period of time, you'll be able to see my stab at it in the aforementioned story idea. :blob_teehee:

Links or it didn't happen. :blobspearpeek:
You can find it as one of my threads. Either that, or just say it didn't happen. :blob_salute:
 

Ananias5

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Third person with internal dialogue for just the main character. No head hopping unless you dedicate an entire chapter to a side character.
I also prefer past tense stories because present tense can get confusing and slow the flow of the story. I understand the appeal for first person but I've never been a fan.
 

JayMark

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0th person is the perspective I attempt to spend most of my time writing in.
 
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