Feedbag Thread For Indie Writers of Original Fictions [Closed Till I Catch Up]

[JayMark]

Oh thank you good sir. Phew

*sits nicely on the cow leather coach*

I took a quick look at your story.

You have readers, rave reviews, and raging fans.
It's light hearted and that works.
I detect heavy AI use, but it's done expertly and remains entertaining so you'll get a pass.
The joke beats land. It's hard to do comedy.
So no, you done good, too good.
I will not review your work.
If I quit writing, I might read it.
The flow feels good and it seems plenty entertaining, which is your stated purposes.
You have your success and are doing well.
You don't need help from a nobody like me.
Go forth and conquer.