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[amirhosseinb1]

I'm back with a new chapter after a bit of a long time. I couldn't dedicate much time to it because of some issues. I know my novel has many flaws, from translation by artificial intelligence to many other things, but please tell me your opinion about it.

The Last Legend: The Rise of Destiny

Aryan is a destiny born to fight against fate. In a world shaped by bloody battles, political intrigues, and hidden betrayals, he must walk a path intertwined with pain, unfulfilled love, and loss. From the fires of childhood to the battlefields, from a magical school to the heart of darkness,...

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[amirhosseinb1]

I know many of you don’t have much time and try to spend the remaining time reading a good novel, but if possible, just read chapter one and give some feedback. I’d really appreciate it.

 

[amirhosseinb1]

Okay but I have a way that you can get your novel in the hand of many readers?

I'm sorry, but I didn't quite understand what you meant. Could you please explain a bit more clearly?

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I'm sorry, but I didn't quite understand what you meant. Could you please explain a bit more clearly?

RichelMark is either a person who does not speak English as a native language, or a bot. And potentially a scammer, given the odd but apparently "view oriented" nature of their posts.