feedback?

AMR

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Hi, I'm a new writer and have been posting on this site for a few months. I'd like to know how to get constructive feedback for my story.

I've tried asking for feedback at the end of chapters, but no one seems interested in leaving comments. It might be because I don’t have many readers yet, but I’d love to receive detailed feedback to improve my work. If any of you would be willing to read my story and share your thoughts here or in the comments or reviews (no pressure if you prefer not to), I’d greatly appreciate it.

As a non-native English speaker, I sometimes write sentences that, while grammatically correct, can feel awkward. I’m eager to improve my writing and would value any advice on this.

My story.

Thank you in advance to everyone who takes the time to read and provide feedback!
 
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