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kokiboki

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I would like to invite you to read my story, "The Devil's Gift," which can be found at https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1225774/the-devils-gift/.

I previously shared a chapter for feedback and received valuable insights Thank you <3

In this post, I am sharing the entire chapter, hoping to gather more helpful reviews after publishing. As readers, your thoughts and opinions are truly valuable, so please feel free to share them with me. I appreciate your support and look forward to hearing from you!
 

SoaringMoon

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A cursory look over, makes my think it is quality work. I'm not going to read it personally, I just wanted to let people in the thread know that so they can read it.

Also, how tf you leave a footnote in the text. That's awesome. I need to do that.
 

kokiboki

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A cursory look over, makes my think it is quality work. I'm not going to read it personally, I just wanted to let people in the thread know that so they can read it.

Also, how tf you leave a footnote in the text. That's awesome. I need to do that.
Adding a Footnote:

To add a footnote, you have two options.

- Use the shortcut

- Type `[modern_footnote][/modern_footnote]` and write your note between the tags.
 

CharlesEBrown

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Interesting. Not completely sure where it is heading from this snippet, and one sentence seems unclear to me but otherwise, definitely shows promise.
 
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