Feedback thread (yes, another one)

[Deleted member 171042]

Im just new here

Endless War: Ralina | ScribbleHub

 

[BarkTwain]

I've been planning to do this for quite some time now, but was waiting for a better moment. Seeing, however, that it may never come, I'm just gonna wing it.

You can share novels of any genre and with any tags - I'm here to give feedback, not to build a reading list. I can't promise that you'll get your feedback on the same day, though.

If you want to get some feedback from this Daikon, please post a link to it in this thread.

Would love your thoughts on my completed work:

Project Star Pickle

Word of advice: don’t go touching weird alien crystals without first considering the consequences, even if they did fall out of the sky and crush your house. Hi there, Jack Cobb here, and see this scar on the palm of my hand? Looks like a pair of lips, right?...

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Thank you!

 

[MesaMesa17]

Hi! I'm new to writing, but I've always wanted to try creating my own story. I have only 5 chapters so far, and I would appreciate your thoughts on it!
Broke but Broken: Overpowered in a Fantasy School