Feedback/Reviews

[sparklebubble]

Hi, again.

I'm taking a small break before uploading the next chapter of my book, and was wondering if anyone wanted a little feedback?

I personally would prefer to do them via private messages because I want to be honest without holding back due to public observance.

I have a bit of writing experience and will not be too harsh! I would also like to be exposed to the different genres on Scribble Hub.

I will commit to reading up to three chapters of your story (they don't have to be in order), but any more than that may be overwhelming for me ?

If I really enjoy it, I will definitely leave a review! I'm excited (and of age, so don't worry about the smut stuff)!

Of course you are welcome to view my story as well, and I hope it entertains you if you choose to do so :)

I would like to avoid these categories:

• Harem/Polygamy
• Demons
• Cousins (or any questionable family relationship stuff)
• Slaves
• Things related to these topics, lol

Thank you for sharing! I look forward to hearing from y'all ?

 

[KoyukiMegumi]

Demons

I'm not sure what you mean by this, but it rules out both my stories, and both have demon creatures. GL!

 

[AdOtherwise]

Hi, again.

I'm taking a small break before uploading the next chapter of my book, and was wondering if anyone wanted a little feedback?

I personally would prefer to do them via private messages because I want to be honest without holding back due to public observance.

I have a bit of writing experience and will not be too harsh! I would also like to be exposed to the different genres on Scribble Hub.

I will commit to reading up to three chapters of your story (they don't have to be in order), but any more than that may be overwhelming for me ?

If I really enjoy it, I will definitely leave a review! I'm excited (and of age, so don't worry about the smut stuff)!

Of course you are welcome to view my story as well, and I hope it entertains you if you choose to do so :)

I would like to avoid these categories:

• Harem/Polygamy
• Demons
• Cousins (or any questionable family relationship stuff)
• Slaves
• Things related to these topics, lol

Thank you for sharing! I look forward to hearing from y'all ?

Lowly Ascent

Within a desolate realm, where discarded worlds were stitched together, a rupture tore open, releasing a small child into the fragmented expanse. Above him, the sky revealed three eerie moons, while an ominous black mass loomed ominously in their wake. Disoriented and engulfed by a putrid...

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[harrydouthwaite]

This is my little story. I look forward to hearing from you. :)

Feelings and Fondness

A Trains On The Brain series story. In the mid-2000s, eleven-year-old Robin Brush lives in the commuter belt village of Stanstead Abbotts in Hertfordshire, England. He suffers constantly from being bullied, ridiculed, or misunderstood by almost everyone. Forced to live an isolated life as an...

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[RemHydragrove]

Hello! Thanks for thr offer!

I have demon tagged in mine, but I thought I would give you a general idea.

In mine it is a cultivation world, and they consider those that practice darker cultivation paths "demons." But they aren't actually the typical horns and stuff demons.

There are also some entities like corpses and ghosts.

If that's a no go, feel free to ignore and I hope you find a bunch of fun genres ^^

Ash and Honey [BL]

Fu Ran is a Peak Master of An Xian Yun Peak. He has been struggling with insomnia ever since he obtained his spiritual weapon, Shi Wei Ji. This silver blade brought with it dreams of the future: nightmares and horrors of his own death. Most of these death’s are...

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[LoneQuack]

Thread of Fate

Fate is a funny word. People love to play with its meaning and its applications. Some call it destiny, others call it inevitable, and a few tend to accompany it with worlds that give it direction. ‘Thread of Fate’ – ah, if fate were a thread, what would that mean? What...

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I can only thank you in advance, thanks for the offer!

 

[sparklebubble]

I'm not sure what you mean by this, but it rules out both my stories, and both have demon creatures. GL!

Aww, maybe next time! Keep me posted if you happen to switch it up in the future ? Thank you

This is my little story. I look forward to hearing from you. :)

Feelings and Fondness

A Trains On The Brain series story. In the mid-2000s, eleven-year-old Robin Brush lives in the commuter belt village of Stanstead Abbotts in Hertfordshire, England. He suffers constantly from being bullied, ridiculed, or misunderstood by almost everyone. Forced to live an isolated life as an...

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Hi, I like what I've read so far! I'll be in touch with you

Thread of Fate

Fate is a funny word. People love to play with its meaning and its applications. Some call it destiny, others call it inevitable, and a few tend to accompany it with worlds that give it direction. ‘Thread of Fate’ – ah, if fate were a thread, what would that mean? What...

www.scribblehub.com

I can only thank you in advance, thanks for the offer!

Of course! Thanks for your response, I'll talk with you soon ?

Hello! Thanks for thr offer!

I have demon tagged in mine, but I thought I would give you a general idea.

In mine it is a cultivation world, and they consider those that practice darker cultivation paths "demons." But they aren't actually the typical horns and stuff demons.

There are also some entities like corpses and ghosts.

If that's a no go, feel free to ignore and I hope you find a bunch of fun genres ^^

Ash and Honey [BL]

Fu Ran is a Peak Master of An Xian Yun Peak. He has been struggling with insomnia ever since he obtained his spiritual weapon, Shi Wei Ji. This silver blade brought with it dreams of the future: nightmares and horrors of his own death. Most of these death’s are...

www.scribblehub.com

Sorry, that's outside of my comfort zone ? Please let me know if you have anything different in the future, though ?

 

[PBJ_Time]

Good evening. I know my story is still in draft form, but I would still love to hear you thoughts about this litRPG I've been working on. Just type your feedback here on this thread if you can.

Beware the Horde

Synopsis Too raw to live, too far to die. Hajime expected the usual things upon being reborn into another world: dragons, magic, a skill system, or maybe even some “chosen hero” prophecy. Instead, he gets an open field and a million slimes surrounding him at every corner. Once the slimes ...

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That and because I'm too embarrassed to show you what I wrote on Wattpad and AO3 for the past couple of months, lmao. I wasn't writing what I wanted to write anyway, unlike here. Thank you!

 

[RemHydragrove]

Sorry, that's outside of my comfort zone ? Please let me know if you have anything different in the future, though ?

of course!! thanks for taking the time to read over my little summary!! ^^ i hope you find things you enjoy!

 

[OmniscientEvilReader]

Im starting to write mine. Im working on the art for the novel image and also on the next chapters.
Altought it may seem like any other game like world, my plan is to include betrayals, killing people close to the main character...
The kind of stuf that is not normaly done. So as im starting i will take into account any suggestions u may have.
I also plan on work a lot on the world building and character developement.


https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1157390/the-useless-became-the-strongest/

P.D: Im new so i dont know if this is how i have to upload my novel. Sry for the inconvenience in advance.

 

[TakeoMasaki]

If you like Si Fi Thriller, please check my ongoing book

The Network

'The Network' is a gripping sci-fi thriller that propels Niko Tesic from a struggling nanomedicine researcher into the heart of a top-secret government project. Unearthed from a mysterious alien artifact, advanced nanorobots hold the potential to revolutionize medicine. However, it also harbors...

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