I'm not really a professional regarding this, but I will say I wouldn't continue reading from the first chapter for a variety of reasons.
The writing like LilRora has said contained some grammatical errors, which I didn't really mind but it's still best you fix. The writing meanwhile is bland, it doesn't really give me a hook or anything that could entice me to read further for questions with the way they were written.
And this is just in general a peeve of mine, but somehow it felt awkward to read the chapter. Felt forced with how hard it was to really connect with, it wasn't rough but it really wasn't smooth as well. I also recommend writing about the action taken first then the person.
For example :
“Of course. I wouldn’t have come this far if I didn’t” Abraham spoke as he looked at the man with a smile. He chugged down the second glass and stared the man in his face with a sorrowful smile. The man was taken aback. He looked at Abraham for a few seconds before continuing “Then why did you come? You knew you would die.”
While correct, and readable felt off to me for some reason. I would have wrote it like this :
“Of course. I wouldn’t have come this far if I didn’t” He spoke, looking at the other man with a smile quirked up on his face. Chugging down a second glass, he started once again with a sorrowful smile instead.
The other man was taken aback, looking at Abraham in silence for a few brief seconds before he responded “Then why did you come? You knew you would die.”
You don't have to take this to heart, since I am in no way experienced in advice, and your novel in general is not something I would read myself since I normally stick to something more familiar.
