Feedback For Amateur Writer

[MakBow]

Even though I have written quite a lot of incomplete novels (I intend to actually finish this one for real) across various platform, I'm still pretty much an amateur when it comes to writing.

I forced myself to think I could write some deep, complicated novel, so I decided for this year to start fresh, making a simple system and novel.

I would love some thoughts when you have the time.

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