Just a quick comment, your chapter order is messed up. You should sort your chapters first.
Edit: Wanting this feedback, I'd like a full book review on my new ongoing novel is contradictory.
How can someone write a full review when the book is still incomplete (ongoing)? This is too much for even the most patient reviewer.
Also, please note, feedback is a golden ticket for authors to improve the quality of their narrative. Don't think of it as a trivial comment you can find on the street.
Furthermore, some reviewers won't bother reading the entire page, not because they're lazy, but because they're mentally exhausted and time-constrained; reviewing other people's work is a tiring volunteer job.
I personally will read max 5 chapters before writing honest feedback based on my reading experience.