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[Briizy98]

Hey guys!

I published my story, Rise of the Firstborn, yesterday and it's gone well so far. If any of you would like to check it out and let me know what you think (either on here, PM, comments, or whichever way you prefer). Let me know if I can do anything in return :)

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/375315/rise-of-the-firstborn/

 

[Lloyd]

You should probably spread your releases out a little bit more. You will get more readers.

 

[Briizy98]

You should probably spread your releases out a little bit more. You will get more readers.

Hey! Thanks for that advice. I'll start doing that :)