Fanfic idea (Marvel)

[WanderingMerlin]

My sister-in-law introduced me to K-POP demon hunters last night and I can't get this idea out of my head
Basic idea is this MC reincarnates in marvel as a demon hunter with a handful of powers/skills among them being the instinctual ability to use/play any weapon/musical instruments they can get their hands on, the ability to conjure any weapon/instrument(cold weapons only), and shadow clone jutsu.
The demon hunters wouldn't know about Kamar-Taj but their shield would use the aggamotto network as a skeleton
Consider the aggamotto network like a divers cage
Reveals themselves as a hero during battle of New York buffing heros/emergency responders while creating a shield to contain the battle and running S&R ops

 

[yokaii]

This is single-handedly the dumbest thing Ive ever had the misfortune of reading.

 

[Arkus86]

Go for it. Worst that can happen, people will tell you it's trash - so average fanfiction, really.
And since I have long ago blocked that tag, it does not affect me either way.

 

[OneSeven7]

It seems ok and just state your main story line clearly.

 

[TheEldritchGod]

What you are describing is a pile of abilities.
Look, is this story for YOU? Then go for it. I've written many a story for ME. Who am I to judge? (yokaii *cough-cough*) But you did post this, therefore asking for feedback.

You are describing a Hero System Character. Look, he has Energy Blast with FX: Music and Multiform FX: Shadow Clone and blah blah blah. It isn't a character. It's a 200 point buy with 150 points of flaws. WHAT IS THE STORY? What's the point? Like, I did, Isekai guy winds up in Isekai world, tries to get home, bumps into A Yellow and Red lantern Ring and then winds up bumping into Superman as Doomsday tries to kill Supes.

However, the POINT of the story is someone who is broken from fghting the good fight for far too long. He wants to go home to DIE and his situation has TRAPPED him in the DC universe and he's trying to get out while at the same time trying to help people while also being an asshole because he's mentally broken.

He also isn't the main hero.

He "saves the day" but also gets saved as well. He's got weaknesses because he's suicidal, but also doesn't want to die, but also wants to help but really wants to be saved.

In other words, he has conflict. He has a goal, but that goal isn't a good one. He makes bad choices because he's imperfect.

In many ways, he's a pile of powers, but the pile of powers each has a reason and a meaning. Each item has a personality and it isn't just about, "Me Got Biggest Fist.", but how those items each interact and in many ways sabotage the MC. In many ways, he is his own worst enemy and really just needs a hug.

His powers are the LEAST interesting thing about him.

Honestly, I have no idea who the character is, what his goals are, what his dreams are, what is stopping him from achieving those dreams... nothing. This idea means nothing, says nothing, and has no hook. It is not a story I would read, because I don't care.

Give me a hook. Give me a single line that wll make me read the first paragraph. Have the first paragraph offer me a question. A question that can only be answered by your story. A question I might be curious to have answered.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Have fun! Write the story you want to read, and someone else will also love it.

 

[WanderingMerlin]

It seems ok and just state your main story line clearly.

Thought is MCU MC discovers they're in marvel age5? 18 by avengers movie. They know the battle is coming and prepare accordingly

 

[DireBadger]

I am pretty sure that the two 'blade' fanfics are reasonably popular.

This is single-handedly the dumbest thing Ive ever had the misfortune of reading.

You haven't been here very long.
Trust me, there are WAY dumber ideas that are popular. (I banged my way through every female in the MCU was on the 'top fiction' list for a day or two last week.)