Does your story have a fucked up moon?

CarburetorThompson

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Sylver

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My story has 3 moons, amateurs :blob_teehee:
 

BearlyAlive

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Lel, I actually added a moonlike structure granting people magic and turning certain people slowly mad into my story. Now I have two moons, or more like 1.5 since the pseudo-moon tries to cannibalize the real one. But that's just some interesting background knowledge almost nobody knows or cares about.
 

tiaf

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There is no moon.
 

Alseki.

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Among the Fantasy Isekai I know of, Grimgar had the most significant impact due to its messed up moon purely setting-wise imo. It was mentioned only for a short while, but left a lasting impression.
 

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I̶̢͕͍̹̟͓͈̔S̴̺̄̂̒̈́̾̽̎̅ ̴̧̱̜̲̱̟̌̀̇ͅT̵̢͖̖̞̰̦̝̂̾͋͋͝H̴̺̻͈͖̬͕̋̓̃Ǎ̷̬̦͇̽̔̕T̵̳̳̩̰́͗͆͛̂ ̴͉͈̱̃̓T̶͍̒͊̕Ḥ̷̄͑̉͝Ë̷̱͋̂̾͝-̴̺̞͔̥̋̀̐̓͐
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̷̢̝̠̱̟̫̪̪̋̀̚I̷̲̺̞̣̻͖͗̀̓T̵̨̨̛̛͚̝͕͍̣̩̈͗̋̿̈͘'̷̡̨̡͈̦͍̓̋S̸͚̬̎̔́̕̕͝͠ ̶͚̩̈́͆͊͝T̸̙͍̩̩̟̲͊̇͜͜H̸͙͍͚̣̅̅̉̈́̈́Ȅ̸̟̟͍̝̈́ ̴̪͓̠̼͓͔̩͑͂̃M̴̢͚̱̬̤͙͇̀̅́̇̏̈͝͝O̷̹͚͉͇̮͂̈́̔͑͊͘O̴̡͎̱̻̻̗̾̆̍̉̈́͋̚N̴͍̟̻̆̀̋̆͘ͅ!̶̛̯̬̈́̇̈́̀̀͗̀!̶̠̺̖̰̩̺̠́̿̔̏̇͂
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Obsoleteness

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So... what's a good way to break it to my readers that the story is cancelled because my moon is normal? :sweating_profusely:
 
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TsumiHokiro

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Could you define what is a normal moon, please?
 

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The moon is not normal. But no one knows about it yet. :blob_whistle_two:
 

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Despite my initial impression, it was not Earth's moon. I was intimately familiar with Luna's appearance, and this one had no craters or scars. Instead, great veins of golden light ran across its white surface, rushing between low mountains and through shallow valleys. Many of them converged in vast lakes of gold, and a soft radiance came from those places that gave the surface a pale yellow tint. Around the moon's edges, my Aura Perception revealed a faint halo of prismatic light.

Did I win?
 
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