Does it look like the description?

[ElijahRyne]

I drew a scene in something I am writing. Below is the image, and in the spoiler is the scene. Do the image fit the scene? Do you have any suggestions?What are your thoughts on the image? The scene? Anything tangentially related? FYI the cliff face is made of a crystal similar to aquamarine in color.

Spoiler: Scene

The Ladybug Hopefuls seemed to leisurely walk down the cliff face, despite the noise. Still, why are they painted red? Doesn’t that mean that it would waste energy in disguising itself in combat? The Ladybugs were climbing down and getting closer. The repetitive shattering noise, too, was becoming overbearing. Their bodies were about 5 meters tall, 15 meters wide, and 20 meters long. They had six mechanical legs with sharp ice pick-like endings. Each leg was at least a meter thick, 5 meters in length when fully extended, and had two joints. One leg would be gradually raised from inside the cliff face, moved two meters closer to us, before it would pierce and shatter the cliff face, then the next would follow. When a leg was taken out of the cliff face, the cliff would regrow? Regenerate? I don’t know, it would perhaps refill the holes left behind. I could not look away

 

[JayMark]

It's a cool picture. I thought they were roaches. I thought they wer walking on ice but cracking it, so something like robot roaches. Like powerful robot roaches that clean things.

 

[Daeron]

I drew a scene in something I am writing. Below is the image, and in the spoiler is the scene. Do the image fit the scene? Do you have any suggestions?What are your thoughts on the image? The scene? Anything tangentially related? FYI the cliff face is made of a crystal similar to aquamarine in color.

Spoiler: Scene

The Ladybug Hopefuls seemed to leisurely walk down the cliff face, despite the noise. Still, why are they painted red? Doesn’t that mean that it would waste energy in disguising itself in combat? The Ladybugs were climbing down and getting closer. The repetitive shattering noise, too, was becoming overbearing. Their bodies were about 5 meters tall, 15 meters wide, and 20 meters long. They had six mechanical legs with sharp ice pick-like endings. Each leg was at least a meter thick, 5 meters in length when fully extended, and had two joints. One leg would be gradually raised from inside the cliff face, moved two meters closer to us, before it would pierce and shatter the cliff face, then the next would follow. When a leg was taken out of the cliff face, the cliff would regrow? Regenerate? I don’t know, it would perhaps refill the holes left behind. I could not look away

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Tbh, i don't really get it. What kind of tension you want to seek from those narrative? Excitement? Or Dreadful feeling?

 

[ElijahRyne]

Tbh, i don't really get it. What kind of tension you want to seek from those narrative? Excitement? Or Dreadful feeling?

Awe and being overwhelmed, to a degree.

 

[JayMark]

If you want to do ladybugs, make them rounder and give them a few more and slightly shorter legs, don't forget the iconic ladybug spots.

 

[Bimbanana]

Its adorable. Remind me of my kid drawing.

Uhh, what's the assignment again?