Discontinued

[RaineAndBow]

I have discontinued this. Thank you!

 

[melchi]

It looks like you linked it to royal road instead of scribblehub.

 

[J_Chemist]

Aye. Though cross-publishing is fine (so long as you follow the rules of both services), if you'd like a review from people on ScribbleHub, you should probably post your story on ScribbleHub.

 

[RaineAndBow]

Aye. Though cross-publishing is fine (so long as you follow the rules of both services), if you'd like a review from people on ScribbleHub, you should probably post your story on ScribbleHub.

It looks like you linked it to royal road instead of scribblehub.

Yeah, my bad, wrong link :P
Edit: changed the link up

 

[J_Chemist]

Much better.

 

[Lloyd]

The writing quality just seems kinda poor. I advise you let it cook a little longer.

 

[RaineAndBow]

The writing quality just seems kinda poor. I advise you let it cook a little longer.

Thank you for the advice. I'll do a double check and try and improve.
Edit: But, I would really appreciate if you could give any specific details, so I may search for something to improve on. Is it just that the pace is garbage, or the story is uninteresting, or perhaps confusing?