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[FieryLou]

I must admit, I was kinda interested in your story after seeing this whole AI accusation, so I gave your "novel" a chance. Sadly, I had to drop it one chapter in. The writing is sus, to say the least. While I do think that a human could potentially write it, the combination doesn't sit well with me.

That being said, I won't accuse you of anything, but I would like to summon our forum's stony expert @StoneInky.

 

[PandaKen07]

They use them in moderation. AI often just spams them, as they are "corretly" at this point.

I just released the full volume — that’s how novelists do it, right? Gotta keep the readers happy, not leave them hanging on a cliff!

If you’re wondering how I do it — just download Microsoft Word or any writing platform, outline your ideas, turn them into full stories, save it all into one complete volume, and then release it. Don’t leave your readers hanging with one chapter at a time!

They sound overly happy I guess? And you seem to onlu use official words, just like ChatGPT would do it. Not saying that you use it, I just want to tell you were the confusion could come from.

I know how to use "em-dashes" my bro
You can use it too, it depends how to use it Em-dashes (—)
Like — To show interruptions or sudden shifts in thought, To replace commas for a stronger pause or dramatic effect

 

[-Omniscient-]

Are you saying they don't like my novel?

When I released my full volume?

Well, gotta keep it professional, bro. Just stay positive. Some people will be happy, and some might not, but that’s just how it goes.
I don’t want to leave them hanging, though... it really depends on them, or if they choose to stay mad. Either way, I’m keeping it professional.

Gee, I wish the translator of a novel that I'm reading has that sort of attitude, I would love a mass release so I'm not checking the page everyday.

 

[PandaKen07]

Gee, I wish the translator of a novel that I'm reading has that sort of attitude, I would love a mass release so I'm not checking the page everyday.

Sorry to see that, my attitude...
If they don’t like my writing, I get that it might be hard to understand sometimes. But hey, maybe after finishing my novel, I’ll do a manhwa version bring the story to life in a different way!

It really depends on my free time, though. A manhwa takes a long time to process, so I’d have to see how things go.

I like them!! Artreus looks serious, Aidan looks furious, and Mikael looks playful!! I mean, I would guess that the last picture is of Artreus and Rafaela, but he doesn't have blue hair...?
My favorite is either Artreus or Mikael.

Their hair isn’t blue, red, or purple — those are just highlights that match the color of their eyes

Glad you love them, I have more characters art like Arthur, Guinevere and Rafaela!

 

[StoneInky]

I must admit, I was kinda interested in your story after seeing this whole AI accusation, so I gave your "novel" a chance. Sadly, I had to drop it one chapter in. The writing is sus, to say the least. While I do think that a human could potentially write it, the combination doesn't sit well with me.

That being said, I won't accuse you of anything, but I would like to summon our forum's stony expert @StoneInky.

Eh, I reviewed it once before. I actually think it's not AI. Instead, someone likely wrote the novel while thinking the AI style was cool and cleaner, and now they have to face the consequences of said decision.

The reason is the wonky rhythm in the novel. AI usually sounds more sterile, and it doesn't use so many one sentence paragraphs.

The parts that do sound AI are the very generic metaphors, plot, and overuse of em-dashes. But that could be style choice and inexperience. The mistakes and clunky writing say 'human-written' to me.

 

[PandaKen07]

Eh, I reviewed it once before. I actually think it's not AI. Instead, someone likely wrote the novel while thinking the AI style was cool and cleaner, and now they have to face the consequences of said decision.

The reason is the wonky rhythm in the novel. AI usually sounds more sterile, and it doesn't use so many one sentence paragraphs.

The parts that do sound AI are the very generic metaphors, plot, and overuse of em-dashes. But that could be style choice and inexperience. The mistakes and clunky writing say 'human-written' to me

Thank you for your comment, bro! I really appreciate it. Anyway, here’s another illustration to give a clearer picture of my novel.

Meet Arthur and Guinevere!

 

[StoneInky]

Thank you for your comment, bro! I really appreciate it. Anyway, here’s another illustration to give a clearer picture of my novel.

Meet Arthur and Guinevere!

Yeah, and your art is just plain human. Not bad human, but you know how AI art is like, lmao.

If you want to make your work be less misunderstood, maybe work on more varied descriptions? For example, 'beautiful as a rose' sounds generic AI, but 'beautiful as a sunflower in crisp summer rain' gives off human vibes? Saying 'His expression twisted with anger, and he clenched his fists', sounds more generic AI compared to ' His fingernails dug into his palms, leaving sharp red marks and bruises.'

 

[PandaKen07]

Yeah, and your art is just plain human. Not bad human, but you know how AI art is like, lmao.

If you want to make your work be less misunderstood, maybe work on more varied descriptions? For example, 'beautiful as a rose' sounds generic AI, but 'beautiful as a sunflower in crisp summer rain' gives off human vibes?

I don't use AI Art, I have my own art skills!

Whoa! It's as beautiful as a sunflower. It reminds me of Rafaela, my character.

Yeah, and your art is just plain human. Not bad human, but you know how AI art is like, lmao.

If you want to make your work be less misunderstood, maybe work on more varied descriptions? For example, 'beautiful as a rose' sounds generic AI, but 'beautiful as a sunflower in crisp summer rain' gives off human vibes? Saying 'His expression twisted with anger, and he clenched his fists', sounds more generic AI compared to ' His fingernails dug into his palms, leaving sharp red marks and bruises.'

I like that part of the sentence, it's clear and understandable. I want to directly convey that Artreus or Aidan is angry, like when I wrote, "His expression twisted into anger, and he clenched his fists." It might sound AI-generated to you, but to me, it's just a clear way to show he's angry and gripping his fists.

That's all

 

[TheIcMan]

How the hell are my replies considered ai-generated? Maybe you didn’t fully understand the words I used — or maybe it’s the em dashes or something?

Well, gotta keep it professional, bro. Just stay positive. Some people will be happy, and some might not, but that’s just how it goes.
I don’t want to leave them hanging, though... it really depends on them, or if they choose to stay mad. Either way, I’m keeping it professional.

They use them in moderation. AI often just spams them, as they are "corretly" at this point.

I just released the full volume — that’s how novelists do it, right? Gotta keep the readers happy, not leave them hanging on a cliff!

If you’re wondering how I do it — just download Microsoft Word or any writing platform, outline your ideas, turn them into full stories, save it all into one complete volume, and then release it. Don’t leave your readers hanging with one chapter at a time!

They sound overly happy I guess? And you seem to onlu use official words, just like ChatGPT would do it. Not saying that you use it, I just want to tell you were the confusion could come from.

Yknow what, I'm pretty sure I'm just brain-rotted from years of apathy on the internet LMAO. But what @FieryLou said, those sentences in particular feel unnatural and uncanny. Like that last example just isn't something a human would write imo. And this kind of overly positive/flowery language isn't the kind you'd usually see from an ESL person or the like.

It generally reads like corpo talk. A.k.a completely inhuman and cold. Like the e-mails I'd get from coworkers and bosses promoting positivity and keeping quotas up. Frankly, it's just weird seeing "professional" style talk in a forum made for creative weebs lmao.

At least the art is decent.

 

[StoneInky]

Yknow what, I'm pretty sure I'm just brain-rotted from years of apathy on the internet LMAO. But what @FieryLou said, those sentences in particular feel unnatural and uncanny. Like that last example just isn't something a human would right imo. And this kind of overly positive/flowery language isn't the kind you'd usually see from an ESL person or the like.

It generally reads like corpo talk. A.k.a completely inhuman and cold. Like the e-mails I'd get from coworkers and bosses promoting positivity and keeping quotas up. Frankly, it's just weird seeing "professional" style talk in a forum made for creative weebs lmao.

At least the art is decent.

Yeah, I understand anyone who thinks this might be AI.

It might(?) be AI generated and human edited? Dunno. Never seen something like this before. The big picture tastes AI, but if you zoom in, there's too many small mistakes for it to be AI-made. It's like... a less polished version of AI?

...Now I realize I'm just roasting this dude's work, Dude, it's ok. Nobody really cares whether it's AI, except for the people you ask to review it. Maybe reviews(?) are just too early for you. Focus on reading, writing, and ignoring what other people think. When your writing levels up, people will be able to tell. It'll be ok.