Adelmarus
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I saw this on royal road and I thought I should do one on scribble. The thing is to write something in 15 minutes by looking for a photo on Pinterest, here's mine:
"Dammit," He breathed lightly. He gave up on trying to break free a long time ago. His legs and arms were bound to a wall.
He struggled to cure his starvation. The only thing he could use to not die of starvation or dehydration is to eat rats that went too close and drink their blood.
He had gotten so used to sickness that he was able to handle poison efficiently. He tried to sleep and forget about his sorrows but, the end of his planet always came to his dreams in what would become a nightmare.
The wasn't even a pinch of light, he relied on sound more than anything else. He wore thin rags that didn't help from the cold. Him being thin wasn't helping either.
"Fuck!" he cried out into the empty air. He had lost the idea of wants a long time ago. He tried to appreciate not being dead but— how could someone live like this?
Ever since the end of his planet, he had been bound to this cold black labyrinth of total hell. "I want to survive, I want to survive, I want to survive." The words always flushed in his head.
He started to drift away into the void. It was hard to maintain a healthy body in a dirty, cold, blood-ridden labyrinth. He didn't know why they allowed him to live. Well, at least for a while— 3 straight years in a cold, and blood-ridden labyrinth.
He started to pray, "great goddess Okami-Amaterasu, show me mercy and allow me to survive!" [Don't die,] A voice spoke into his head. "Huh! who's there!" He looked around, but everything was dull. [I am Gaia, the core of earth,] "Gaia?! The core of the earth?" Satoshi was shocked.
Humans used the Gaia, as they called it, to get large amounts of energy. Suddenly science fiction became a reality. But they shouldn't have used things to peak out into the universe. Curiosity was the downfall of earth. "Gaia, can you help me?"
[First, what is your name?] "Onikawa, Onikawa Fumetsu,"
He felt a pain in his head, and then suddenly, Fumetsu could see around him. He could rip through the chains. [From now on, we are one, forever] he felt a menacing aura coming from his body.
Fumetsu stretched his arms out, "Finally, I'm free."
I did this in 7-9 minutes then stopped cause I didn't know where to go anymore, I really liked what I wrote and am planning on making it a whole book(Eventually)
Pin: don't know how I came up with the story idea from this pin.
"Dammit," He breathed lightly. He gave up on trying to break free a long time ago. His legs and arms were bound to a wall.
He struggled to cure his starvation. The only thing he could use to not die of starvation or dehydration is to eat rats that went too close and drink their blood.
He had gotten so used to sickness that he was able to handle poison efficiently. He tried to sleep and forget about his sorrows but, the end of his planet always came to his dreams in what would become a nightmare.
The wasn't even a pinch of light, he relied on sound more than anything else. He wore thin rags that didn't help from the cold. Him being thin wasn't helping either.
"Fuck!" he cried out into the empty air. He had lost the idea of wants a long time ago. He tried to appreciate not being dead but— how could someone live like this?
Ever since the end of his planet, he had been bound to this cold black labyrinth of total hell. "I want to survive, I want to survive, I want to survive." The words always flushed in his head.
He started to drift away into the void. It was hard to maintain a healthy body in a dirty, cold, blood-ridden labyrinth. He didn't know why they allowed him to live. Well, at least for a while— 3 straight years in a cold, and blood-ridden labyrinth.
He started to pray, "great goddess Okami-Amaterasu, show me mercy and allow me to survive!" [Don't die,] A voice spoke into his head. "Huh! who's there!" He looked around, but everything was dull. [I am Gaia, the core of earth,] "Gaia?! The core of the earth?" Satoshi was shocked.
Humans used the Gaia, as they called it, to get large amounts of energy. Suddenly science fiction became a reality. But they shouldn't have used things to peak out into the universe. Curiosity was the downfall of earth. "Gaia, can you help me?"
[First, what is your name?] "Onikawa, Onikawa Fumetsu,"
He felt a pain in his head, and then suddenly, Fumetsu could see around him. He could rip through the chains. [From now on, we are one, forever] he felt a menacing aura coming from his body.
Fumetsu stretched his arms out, "Finally, I'm free."
I did this in 7-9 minutes then stopped cause I didn't know where to go anymore, I really liked what I wrote and am planning on making it a whole book(Eventually)
Pin: don't know how I came up with the story idea from this pin.