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Adelmarus

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I saw this on royal road and I thought I should do one on scribble. The thing is to write something in 15 minutes by looking for a photo on Pinterest, here's mine:


"Dammit," He breathed lightly. He gave up on trying to break free a long time ago. His legs and arms were bound to a wall.

He struggled to cure his starvation. The only thing he could use to not die of starvation or dehydration is to eat rats that went too close and drink their blood.

He had gotten so used to sickness that he was able to handle poison efficiently. He tried to sleep and forget about his sorrows but, the end of his planet always came to his dreams in what would become a nightmare.

The wasn't even a pinch of light, he relied on sound more than anything else. He wore thin rags that didn't help from the cold. Him being thin wasn't helping either.

"Fuck!" he cried out into the empty air. He had lost the idea of wants a long time ago. He tried to appreciate not being dead but— how could someone live like this?

Ever since the end of his planet, he had been bound to this cold black labyrinth of total hell. "I want to survive, I want to survive, I want to survive." The words always flushed in his head.

He started to drift away into the void. It was hard to maintain a healthy body in a dirty, cold, blood-ridden labyrinth. He didn't know why they allowed him to live. Well, at least for a while— 3 straight years in a cold, and blood-ridden labyrinth.

He started to pray, "great goddess Okami-Amaterasu, show me mercy and allow me to survive!" [Don't die,] A voice spoke into his head. "Huh! who's there!" He looked around, but everything was dull. [I am Gaia, the core of earth,] "Gaia?! The core of the earth?" Satoshi was shocked.

Humans used the Gaia, as they called it, to get large amounts of energy. Suddenly science fiction became a reality. But they shouldn't have used things to peak out into the universe. Curiosity was the downfall of earth. "Gaia, can you help me?"

[First, what is your name?] "Onikawa, Onikawa Fumetsu,"
He felt a pain in his head, and then suddenly, Fumetsu could see around him. He could rip through the chains. [From now on, we are one, forever] he felt a menacing aura coming from his body.
Fumetsu stretched his arms out, "Finally, I'm free."




I did this in 7-9 minutes then stopped cause I didn't know where to go anymore, I really liked what I wrote and am planning on making it a whole book(Eventually)

Pin: don't know how I came up with the story idea from this pin.
 

ArcadiaBlade

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[What do you wish to offer] a mechanical voice appear at the darkest corners in his mind.

"To hell with you. I have enough." He said as he basically gave up hope.

He was just a normal person, living a normal life. Casually talking with his friends, enjoying the moments with his family. It all goes to hell the moment those monsters came and took it all.

[Do you wish to save humanity?]

"Humanity? We can always just rot in hell for all I care." He said with a sneer on his face.

Those people he once trusted had abandoned him to the abyss, letting him rot into this place. His family being torned to pieces first before his friends had betrayed him and even the girl he liked were fed to those monsters just so they can live.

[And So, you wish for them to...] as the metalic voice respond to the young man's words, he smiled with no willingness to become the humanity's savior, instead.

"Revenge. Let these humans feel my pain.] he chucked as his voice became metalic. He was shocked about the change in his voice then he suddenly notice the new change as he looked through his arm which was slowly being peeled off from existance and turning metalic.

[As you wish] the voice replied emotionlessly as he screamed his lungs, from the intense pain of losing his flesh to machinery.

Yet, at the same time he was too disbelief to see this happening over to him.
 

ThrillingHuman

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Ikarus felt the excruciating pain of the overheated mechanic parts eating into his fresh. God knows, Ikarus was a strong boy, but this torture was something humans weren't built to experience. The pain was unbearable, and the longer he felt it, the worse it grew, until his mind was filled with nothing but the never-ending suffering.
Asking how long he was in that state would be cruel - cruel and useless, for Ikarus would have no answer. But, like all things, the pain eventually went away, along with all feeling from his body neck down.
Liberated from it, Ikarus could, if only for a moment, appreciate the view - the very reason he dared to fly so high, in his youthful arrogance.
The skies were clear. There was no end in sight, no matter how much he focused his gaze. It looked like a blue veil covering behind it infinite mysteries, daring the observer to try and peek behind it, only to frustrate them with failure to see even a small corner of the truth.
Endless, infinite, majestic, such was the sky. Ikarus held his breath in awe as tears pooled in his eyes. The sun shone way above, filling everything with the omnipresent warm light. It was bright and warm, returning him to times long past, when he was an innocent child. These memories made him feel nostalgic and made his heart beat faster. He had to admit, for a short moment he felt happy.
As he looked above, into the ever-present and ever-mysterious skies he wished that he was a bird who could fly among the clouds. Alas, he was but a human and he couldn’t stay among the clouds. With the last trace of regret in his heart, he closed his eyes and fell back onto the earth...
 
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