Bonnie's Full Moon Blues- Chapter 1 and 2 feedback!

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Bonnie’s Full Moon Blues

Hello, my name is Bonnie, Bonnie Lupin, and until last night, I was just like you, a normal girl who had it all, hot body, captain of the Basketball team, and was the most popular girl in school, at least until I was attacked by a Werewolf while on my...

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This will be the first werewolf story i will write so feedback and criticism is welcome, also ideas for future antagonists will be welcome and credited.

From Cheerleader To Werewolf Queen!

You are the most popular girl in high school, hot body, cheer captain, boys want to get in your pants, basically the total package, until one fateful night, on your way home from school, you are struck down by a pack of wolves! You soon find yourself in the hospital, only to find yourself...

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Also to those curious, yes this story drew inspiration from one of my previous writing prompts!