BEGGING For FeedBack !

[OneSeven7]

This is the first time I actually wrote a serial novel and I would love to please have some feedback and likes.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1827489/wrc-full-throttle/
Really, I'm just writing for fun but still I post very regularly.

 

[Natsummer]

Chapter 1 is decent. I like some of the humor in there. However, there's a hint of LLM/ChatGPT flavor.
Chapter 2 and beyond, is filled with LLM/GPT structures.
Sorry, but please fix them. I am not reading anything beyond Chapter 1 until you re-write them.

Interesting concept and theme though.

 

[askheraboutus]

Read your All chapters and An idea regarding to your story a cover art idea popped up in my mind so if you are interested in it so we can Discus about it on Discord OR instagram
Discord Username: ghostriderrobbie2469662
Instagram Username: Ghostswingin

 

[OneSeven7]

Chapter 1 is decent. I like some of the humor in there. However, there's a hint of LLM/ChatGPT flavor.
Chapter 2 and beyond, is filled with LLM/GPT structures.
Sorry, but please fix them. I am not reading anything beyond Chapter 1 until you re-write them.

Interesting concept and theme though.

Thanks for the reply and I would fix the problems.

Read your All chapters and An idea regarding to your story a cover art idea popped up in my mind so if you are interested in it so we can Discus about it on Discord OR instagram
Discord Username: ghostriderrobbie2469662
Instagram Username: Ghostswingin

Thanks. Maybe I'll add you on Discord.

 

[LeilaniOtter]

Thanks. Maybe I'll add you on Discord.

Um, may I suggest you don't do that...?

Also, if you want honest feedback from anyone here, please first re-write this without the use of AI. If you're translating, fine, then work with a better translator. This is a racing journey and you're writing like it's some kind of elegant mystery. What is your narrator, a race car driver, or an upper-class historian? I can see right through ChatGTP prose.