Beast Heroes: Roxy's Rebirth feedback!

[MC-Stories]

Beast Heroes: Roxy’s Rebirth!

Do you believe in Seccond Chances, if not, neither did I, that is until my girlfriend killed me just to survive, I realized that the love we had wasn't love at all, but as soon as I realized my fate, I was sent back in time to the day me...

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Although I have learned from my mistakes with previous entriest in the Beast Heroes series, you feedback on this WILL be greatly appreciated,

 

[CountVanBadger]

Spelling and grammatical errors in the synopsis means instant pass for me.

 

[TheIcMan]

Holy run-on sentence batman