Aspire to write like this!

[Representing_Tromba]

 

[georgelee5786]

I retire, I'll never be this good, so why write?

 

[Representing_Tromba]

I retire, I'll never be this good, so why write?

You can do it! I believe in you!

 

[ParticleOfSand]

I feel that the narration played a part in making it sound better

 

[TheEldritchGod]

I haz a disapoint.

Grover should have realized he was God and shot himself.

 

[TsumiHokiro]

I haz a disapoint.

Grover should have realized he was God and shot himself.

My same thoughts. The ending was somewhat lukewarm...

 

[TheEldritchGod]

My same thoughts. The ending was somewhat lukewarm...

Also, as a deity's rights activist, I must say, that this sort of anti-god propaganda is disturbing.
Why does SH allow such hate speech?

 

[TsumiHokiro]

Also, as a deity's rights activist, I must say, that this sort of anti-god propaganda is disturbing.
Why does SH allow such hate speech?

Kind of hard to tell. Maybe people forget that even Gods have rights. And that you shouldn't incentivize their killing! You never know how hurt they might end up hearing such things, after all.

 

[BlackKnightX]

Nice narration. Now I know what I aspire to sound like, thanks.

 

[Corty]

We can only get so close to the sun before being burnt by it. Sage...

 

[Representing_Tromba]

I feel that the narration played a part in making it sound better

I agree but it is still very well written. Each sentence has a purpose and a punch.

 

[LuoirM]

Holy fuck I think I found someone I can look up to.