Apology and Clarification for Previous Thread ?

[Alski]

Did I miss something popcorn-worthy?

Man, I guess I gotta get out of the habit of sleeping and start browsing the forums 24/7. This is simply unnacceptable.

You missed at least 3 multi page threads that got deleted over the past 5 days.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

You missed at least 3 multi page threads that got deleted over the past 5 days.

Give me the tea!

 

[Empress_Omnii]

You missed at least 3 multi page threads that got deleted over the past 5 days.

I only saw one... how disappointing

 

[Alski]

2 of them spiraled from one of my comments, i missed the one that this thread references.

 

[FieryLou]

I was one of the people who was there yesterday. I don't think it was just about the thread, but your whole work. The first 3 chapters that were posted, and the rest on Royal Road had a big formatting problem.

Example:
The Morning Rush

The last traces of winter hung in the air as melted snow dripped from the neighborhood's Christmas trees. The warm sun peeked through the curtains of Kenji Ryu's room, but it wasn't enough to keep him from groaning when his alarm clock blared at 6:00 AM. He lazily turned it off and snuggled back into his blanket. Just five more minutes...

By the time his eyes fluttered open again, it was 6:30 AM.

"Oh no, not again!" Ryu muttered as he jumped out of bed. He dashed around his messy room, shoving books, pens, and who-knows-what-else into his bag. His breakfast consisted of snatching a piece of toast as it popped out of the toaster. With bread dangling from his mouth, he slipped on his shoes and bolted out the door. Pedaling furiously on his bike, he managed to slip into his classroom just as the bell rang. Barely.

The Search for Aido

The morning classes passed in a blur. By break time, Ryu had only one thing on his mind: finding his best friend, Aiden "Aido" Rys. After a fruitless search through Class 2-D and a couple of hangout spots, Ryu sighed, rubbing his temples. He knew exactly where Aido would be.

Ryu pushed open the door to Aido's room without knocking. The sight was all too familiar: Aido sprawled out on his bed, blissfully asleep, completely ignoring the world outside.

"Aido! Wake up!" Ryu yelled, pulling the blanket off his friend. When that didn't work, he resorted to slapping him.

Aido groaned, pulling a pillow over his head. "Five more minutes..."

"Five minutes my foot!" Ryu grumbled, giving Aido's shoulder a shake and, for good measure, a gentle kick to his rear. Eventually, Aido dragged himself out of bed, half-asleep and entirely unbothered. Ryu had to practically shove him into clothes to get him ready for the day.

The Convenience Store Detour

Once they were finally on their bikes, Ryu took the lead, pedaling aggressively through the streets. The scenery blurred past them: a wide bridge over a sparkling river, colorful spring forests, and a mountain shrouded in clouds. Aido, trailing behind, marveled at the view—until his stomach let out a loud growl.

"Hey, there's a convenience store!" Aido called out, pointing to the side. "Let's stop for a snack."

Ryu groaned. "Seriously? You just woke up!" But he gave in, following Aido inside.

Aido grabbed a meat bun, and Ryu picked a sweet coffee. Aido, being unusually generous, paid for both. They were halfway through enjoying their snacks when Ryu glanced at the clock near the bus stop. His eyes widened.

"Break time's over!"

The two scrambled back to school, trying to sneak in unnoticed. However, their luck ran out at the hallway, where they encountered Mr. Theodore Brookshade, the school's notoriously strict teacher. He was busy signing the attendance register when he caught sight of the duo attempting their usual routine of slipping in as if it were just another ordinary day.

Trouble with Mr. Brookshade

"Late again, Ryu? And Aido, I see you've decided to grace us with your presence," Mr. Brookshade said, his sharp gaze boring into them.

Ryu bowed deeply, stammering out an apology. Meanwhile, Aido stood there with his hands shoved in his pockets, his posture slouched and his eyes half-closed, as if the lecture was nothing more than background noise. His laziness only seemed to fuel the teacher's frustration. After a scathing lecture, Mr. Brookshade walked off, leaving Ryu fuming.

While walking to the class...

"Why is it always because of you that I get into trouble?!" Ryu snapped, shaking Aido's shoulder.

Aido rubbed his eyes and yawned. "Relax, you'll live."

Before Ryu could stop himself, he swung a fist. Aido, caught off guard, blocked poorly, and Ryu's punch grazed his cheek. The entire class, which had been quietly watching the scene, gasped in unison.

Ryu froze, his anger replaced with instant regret. "Oh no... Aido, I—I'm so sorry!"

Aido straightened up, touching his cheek where a small red mark was already forming. He shrugged. "No big deal. Just don't punch me next time."

Whole class was watching but no one seemed to care much. A classmate who sits next to both blockheads nudged Ryu. "You better get him to the nurse's office before Mr. Brookshade sees that."

The Nurse's Office

The nurse's office smelled faintly of herbs and antiseptic. Nurse Viola Dawnstone gave Ryu a knowing look as she used healing magic to soothe Aido's cheek. Aido leaned back in the chair, looking as if he might doze off again. Meanwhile, Ryu sat by the window, lost in thought.

He gazed out at the horizon. The sight of students practicing magic in the courtyard below brought a pang of longing. Ryu had no magical affinity like Aido's. All he had was his determination—and his best friend's infuriating laziness to deal with.

A Walk Home

The final bell rang, signaling the end of the school day. As they walked home together, Ryu tried to convince Aido to start coming to school more regularly.

"You missed three months at the beginning of the year! You're going to fail at this rate," Ryu lectured.

Aido smirked. "Maybe I'll transfer to the magic academy. With my affinity, I'd fit right in."

Ryu rolled his eyes. "You? The weakest in the academy? Good luck with that."

"You've never seen my actual power", Aido smirks.

They both laughed, their footsteps echoing down the empty street. When they passed a vending machine, Ryu stopped to buy two cans of coffee. Handing one to Aido, he cracked his open and took a long sip.

"Caffeine is the best," Ryu said, sighing contentedly.

Aido grinned. "I could sell my soul for caffeine."

Ryu snorted, and the two dissolved into laughter. By the time they reached home, the day's chaos felt like a distant memory. Despite everything, their bond was stronger than ever.
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I mean, what is this even supposed to be?

 

[Deleted member 202795]

I was one of the people who was there yesterday. I don't think it was just about the thread, but your whole work. The first 3 chapters that were posted, and the rest on Royal Road had a big formatting problem.

Example:
The Morning Rush

The last traces of winter hung in the air as melted snow dripped from the neighborhood's Christmas trees. The warm sun peeked through the curtains of Kenji Ryu's room, but it wasn't enough to keep him from groaning when his alarm clock blared at 6:00 AM. He lazily turned it off and snuggled back into his blanket. Just five more minutes...

By the time his eyes fluttered open again, it was 6:30 AM.

"Oh no, not again!" Ryu muttered as he jumped out of bed. He dashed around his messy room, shoving books, pens, and who-knows-what-else into his bag. His breakfast consisted of snatching a piece of toast as it popped out of the toaster. With bread dangling from his mouth, he slipped on his shoes and bolted out the door. Pedaling furiously on his bike, he managed to slip into his classroom just as the bell rang. Barely.

The Search for Aido

The morning classes passed in a blur. By break time, Ryu had only one thing on his mind: finding his best friend, Aiden "Aido" Rys. After a fruitless search through Class 2-D and a couple of hangout spots, Ryu sighed, rubbing his temples. He knew exactly where Aido would be.

Ryu pushed open the door to Aido's room without knocking. The sight was all too familiar: Aido sprawled out on his bed, blissfully asleep, completely ignoring the world outside.

"Aido! Wake up!" Ryu yelled, pulling the blanket off his friend. When that didn't work, he resorted to slapping him.

Aido groaned, pulling a pillow over his head. "Five more minutes..."

"Five minutes my foot!" Ryu grumbled, giving Aido's shoulder a shake and, for good measure, a gentle kick to his rear. Eventually, Aido dragged himself out of bed, half-asleep and entirely unbothered. Ryu had to practically shove him into clothes to get him ready for the day.

The Convenience Store Detour

Once they were finally on their bikes, Ryu took the lead, pedaling aggressively through the streets. The scenery blurred past them: a wide bridge over a sparkling river, colorful spring forests, and a mountain shrouded in clouds. Aido, trailing behind, marveled at the view—until his stomach let out a loud growl.

"Hey, there's a convenience store!" Aido called out, pointing to the side. "Let's stop for a snack."

Ryu groaned. "Seriously? You just woke up!" But he gave in, following Aido inside.

Aido grabbed a meat bun, and Ryu picked a sweet coffee. Aido, being unusually generous, paid for both. They were halfway through enjoying their snacks when Ryu glanced at the clock near the bus stop. His eyes widened.

"Break time's over!"

The two scrambled back to school, trying to sneak in unnoticed. However, their luck ran out at the hallway, where they encountered Mr. Theodore Brookshade, the school's notoriously strict teacher. He was busy signing the attendance register when he caught sight of the duo attempting their usual routine of slipping in as if it were just another ordinary day.

Trouble with Mr. Brookshade

"Late again, Ryu? And Aido, I see you've decided to grace us with your presence," Mr. Brookshade said, his sharp gaze boring into them.

Ryu bowed deeply, stammering out an apology. Meanwhile, Aido stood there with his hands shoved in his pockets, his posture slouched and his eyes half-closed, as if the lecture was nothing more than background noise. His laziness only seemed to fuel the teacher's frustration. After a scathing lecture, Mr. Brookshade walked off, leaving Ryu fuming.

While walking to the class...

"Why is it always because of you that I get into trouble?!" Ryu snapped, shaking Aido's shoulder.

Aido rubbed his eyes and yawned. "Relax, you'll live."

Before Ryu could stop himself, he swung a fist. Aido, caught off guard, blocked poorly, and Ryu's punch grazed his cheek. The entire class, which had been quietly watching the scene, gasped in unison.

Ryu froze, his anger replaced with instant regret. "Oh no... Aido, I—I'm so sorry!"

Aido straightened up, touching his cheek where a small red mark was already forming. He shrugged. "No big deal. Just don't punch me next time."

Whole class was watching but no one seemed to care much. A classmate who sits next to both blockheads nudged Ryu. "You better get him to the nurse's office before Mr. Brookshade sees that."

The Nurse's Office

The nurse's office smelled faintly of herbs and antiseptic. Nurse Viola Dawnstone gave Ryu a knowing look as she used healing magic to soothe Aido's cheek. Aido leaned back in the chair, looking as if he might doze off again. Meanwhile, Ryu sat by the window, lost in thought.

He gazed out at the horizon. The sight of students practicing magic in the courtyard below brought a pang of longing. Ryu had no magical affinity like Aido's. All he had was his determination—and his best friend's infuriating laziness to deal with.

A Walk Home

The final bell rang, signaling the end of the school day. As they walked home together, Ryu tried to convince Aido to start coming to school more regularly.

"You missed three months at the beginning of the year! You're going to fail at this rate," Ryu lectured.

Aido smirked. "Maybe I'll transfer to the magic academy. With my affinity, I'd fit right in."

Ryu rolled his eyes. "You? The weakest in the academy? Good luck with that."

"You've never seen my actual power", Aido smirks.

They both laughed, their footsteps echoing down the empty street. When they passed a vending machine, Ryu stopped to buy two cans of coffee. Handing one to Aido, he cracked his open and took a long sip.

"Caffeine is the best," Ryu said, sighing contentedly.

Aido grinned. "I could sell my soul for caffeine."

Ryu snorted, and the two dissolved into laughter. By the time they reached home, the day's chaos felt like a distant memory. Despite everything, their bond was stronger than ever.
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I mean, what is this even supposed to be?

I was wondering—was it mainly the formatting that affected the experience, or did the writing itself feel off in parts too? I was writing it roughly at first, but it felt like it could flow well... maybe the section breaks are messing with the pacing or something else/too? I will try my best to edit and make it sure for our upcoming chapters! Insight would be appreciated if i am taking this as needed criticism!

 

[FieryLou]

I was wondering—was it mainly the formatting that affected the experience, or did the writing itself feel off in parts too? I was writing it roughly at first, but it felt like it could flow well... maybe the section breaks are messing with the pacing or something else/too? I will try my best to edit and make it sure for our upcoming chapters! Insight would be appreciated if i am taking this as needed criticism!

It just that it makes no sense. Why would you break it in sections? This could be the reason why people think it was AI, because that is something AI does. NO sane author would do this. Why would they in the first place?

 

[Deleted member 202795]

It just that it makes no sense. Why would you break it in sections? This could be the reason why people think it was AI, because that is something AI does. NO sane author would do this. Why would they in the first place?

I actually used those section breaks because I wanted to give each scene its own space and make the time and scene transitions clearer. Maybe I overdid it with the sectioning, though! It doesn’t mean I’m insane- it just means I was blatantly skimming through YouTube tutorials without experience and not fully understanding it- like the condition it applies where to make section what to make section of (I think I'll watch more tutorials on this). I thought adding sections would help with pacing, but it ended up feeling a bit clunky. It's my fault for not understanding better how to and what you need in order to make it section... like y'know the conditions areas how to execute it properly. After thinking about it again, I see how it could use some smoother transitions, and I’ll definitely redo those things part!


First, I'll focus on improving transitions to make things smoother. The section breaks helped me cut through the mental blocks I face, like when I couldn't think of what to write next, breaking things up helped me keep going. But I see now how it might have disrupted the flow. I'll work on finding better ways to transition between scenes while keeping the pacing steady!

I'm just a newbie, and this experience has been a real deal. I was too confident, thinking my planned ideas alone (for future) would make my fiction stand out, but the reality is, there's a lot to learn and a long way to go. Like the starting hooks, flows, endings, hangers, unnecessary details, etc like I've been now getting messages after that thread. The section break mistake and the dreadful thread (Even tho it gave me reviews and some, a little more than some criticism) was a tough lesson, but I realized where I need to improve. Even though it’s drained my energy for the day, I know this will make the fiction better and better... I strongly believe that I can deliver if being told what to do and what not to do. I’ll keep learning!

Will go through re- revising every chapter just before Arc 2 starts!

 

[FieryLou]

I actually used those section breaks because I wanted to give each scene its own space and make the time and scene transitions clearer. Maybe I overdid it with the sectioning, though! It doesn’t mean I’m insane- it just means I was blatantly skimming through YouTube tutorials without experience and not fully understanding it- like the condition it applies where to make section what to make section of (I think I'll watch more tutorials on this). I thought adding sections would help with pacing, but it ended up feeling a bit clunky. It's my fault for not understanding better how to and what you need in order to make it section... like y'know the conditions areas how to execute it properly. After thinking about it again, I see how it could use some smoother transitions, and I’ll definitely redo those things part!


First, I'll focus on improving transitions to make things smoother. The section breaks helped me cut through the mental blocks I face, like when I couldn't think of what to write next, breaking things up helped me keep going. But I see now how it might have disrupted the flow. I'll work on finding better ways to transition between scenes while keeping the pacing steady!

I'm just a newbie, and this experience has been a real deal. I was too confident, thinking my planned ideas alone (for future) would make my fiction stand out, but the reality is, there's a lot to learn and a long way to go. Like the starting hooks, flows, endings, hangers, unnecessary details, etc like I've been now getting messages after that thread. The section break mistake and the dreadful thread (Even tho it gave me reviews and some, a little more than some criticism) was a tough lesson, but I realized where I need to improve. Even though it’s drained my energy for the day, I know this will make the fiction better and better... I strongly believe that I can deliver if being told what to do and what not to do. I’ll keep learning!

Will go through re- revising every chapter just before Arc 2 starts!

Did you never read a webnovel before, because this is like the basic of basics.

 

[Deleted member 202795]

Did you never read a webnovel before, because this is like the basic of basics.

Never read web novel other than 86 before yep! Only webtoons... I should probably stop embarassing myself more!

 

[FieryLou]

Never read web novel other than 86 before yep! Only webtoons...

Then here comes the solution. Read webnovels. As easy as this.

 

[Ryudo_xd]

You remove the vote by removing the novel from your reading list. I rate my own novels to tweak with the overall rating, and I bet I'm not the only one.

BTW: I have no idea what ".... glad to make your Acquaintance ?" is supposed to mean

just formality nothing much

You remove the vote by removing the novel from your reading list. I rate my own novels to tweak with the overall rating, and I bet I'm not the only one.

BTW: I have no idea what ".... glad to make your Acquaintance ?" is supposed to mean

It just that it makes no sense. Why would you break it in sections? This could be the reason why people think it was AI, because that is something AI does. NO sane author would do this. Why would they in the first place?

i think those sections makes our work look kind of organised and also feels good to read though they don't do it in almost every novel but i think this section thing shouldn't be the reason if there's something else we'd like to hear you out

 

[aurifex]

the problem isn't that the cover was ai or that the promotion post was ai

the problem is that the prose itself clearly came straight out of a chatbot

in the absolute best case you wrote a rough outline and told the bot to spit out prose. i wouldn't be surprised if you didn't even do that and just let it figure out the story AND write the prose

you're clearly a beginner to writing. no beginner would write these sentences. they're slop, but they're clean, grammatical, and use strong word choice. i guess no one in this forum reads OR writes, but I do, and it's obvious when a beginner is using AI. a true beginner has sentences with weird flow, strange constructions, boring word choice, comma splices, dialogue misformatting, etc etc etc. but at least it has some fucking soul

stop passing it off as your own writing. anybody with two brain cells knows you're lying.

 

[Ryudo_xd]

the problem isn't that the cover was ai or that the promotion post was ai

the problem is that the prose itself clearly came straight out of a chatbot

in the absolute best case you wrote a rough outline and told the bot to spit out prose. i wouldn't be surprised if you didn't even do that and just let it figure out the story AND write the prose

you're clearly a beginner to writing. no beginner would write these sentences. they're slop, but they're clean, grammatical, and use strong word choice. i guess no one in this forum reads OR writes, but I do, and it's obvious when a beginner is using AI. a true beginner has sentences with weird flow, strange constructions, boring word choice, comma splices, dialogue misformatting, etc etc etc. but at least it has some fucking soul

stop passing it off as your own writing. anybody with two brain cells knows you're lying.

If you're accusing us for the cover and promo shi* we'd gladly accept our mistake. But the prose thing is completely diff matter; we've put our every possible effort into it and it's 100% genuine.

About your accusations :

> the grammar can be improved if your language is good and if you have friends to talk to in that language.
>for the strong words or rather i would say new words and words that fit the sentence can always be found by looking for the synonyms in your dictionary or anywhere that doesn't matter
>and for the rest complaints, the logic you're speaking of only applies when there's a single writer writing his novel but for 2 writers they can always correct each other's blunders and cover up for that and that's what you call coordination in this field.



Anyways! I don't like to argue at all so if you're going to continue this ... I don't give a shi*

but if you wanna be our friend to guide us we are more than happy to accept that kind gesture of yours

(Don't take it to heart coz many times when I don't use emojis in my text they feel like I'm being all harsh and serious but I'm actually not, at least not at the moment)

That's all i have to say; now then, if you'll excuse me !

I was one of the people who was there yesterday. I don't think it was just about the thread, but your whole work. The first 3 chapters that were posted, and the rest on Royal Road had a big formatting problem.

Example:
The Morning Rush

The last traces of winter hung in the air as melted snow dripped from the neighborhood's Christmas trees. The warm sun peeked through the curtains of Kenji Ryu's room, but it wasn't enough to keep him from groaning when his alarm clock blared at 6:00 AM. He lazily turned it off and snuggled back into his blanket. Just five more minutes...

By the time his eyes fluttered open again, it was 6:30 AM.

"Oh no, not again!" Ryu muttered as he jumped out of bed. He dashed around his messy room, shoving books, pens, and who-knows-what-else into his bag. His breakfast consisted of snatching a piece of toast as it popped out of the toaster. With bread dangling from his mouth, he slipped on his shoes and bolted out the door. Pedaling furiously on his bike, he managed to slip into his classroom just as the bell rang. Barely.

The Search for Aido

The morning classes passed in a blur. By break time, Ryu had only one thing on his mind: finding his best friend, Aiden "Aido" Rys. After a fruitless search through Class 2-D and a couple of hangout spots, Ryu sighed, rubbing his temples. He knew exactly where Aido would be.

Ryu pushed open the door to Aido's room without knocking. The sight was all too familiar: Aido sprawled out on his bed, blissfully asleep, completely ignoring the world outside.

"Aido! Wake up!" Ryu yelled, pulling the blanket off his friend. When that didn't work, he resorted to slapping him.

Aido groaned, pulling a pillow over his head. "Five more minutes..."

"Five minutes my foot!" Ryu grumbled, giving Aido's shoulder a shake and, for good measure, a gentle kick to his rear. Eventually, Aido dragged himself out of bed, half-asleep and entirely unbothered. Ryu had to practically shove him into clothes to get him ready for the day.

The Convenience Store Detour

Once they were finally on their bikes, Ryu took the lead, pedaling aggressively through the streets. The scenery blurred past them: a wide bridge over a sparkling river, colorful spring forests, and a mountain shrouded in clouds. Aido, trailing behind, marveled at the view—until his stomach let out a loud growl.

"Hey, there's a convenience store!" Aido called out, pointing to the side. "Let's stop for a snack."

Ryu groaned. "Seriously? You just woke up!" But he gave in, following Aido inside.

Aido grabbed a meat bun, and Ryu picked a sweet coffee. Aido, being unusually generous, paid for both. They were halfway through enjoying their snacks when Ryu glanced at the clock near the bus stop. His eyes widened.

"Break time's over!"

The two scrambled back to school, trying to sneak in unnoticed. However, their luck ran out at the hallway, where they encountered Mr. Theodore Brookshade, the school's notoriously strict teacher. He was busy signing the attendance register when he caught sight of the duo attempting their usual routine of slipping in as if it were just another ordinary day.

Trouble with Mr. Brookshade

"Late again, Ryu? And Aido, I see you've decided to grace us with your presence," Mr. Brookshade said, his sharp gaze boring into them.

Ryu bowed deeply, stammering out an apology. Meanwhile, Aido stood there with his hands shoved in his pockets, his posture slouched and his eyes half-closed, as if the lecture was nothing more than background noise. His laziness only seemed to fuel the teacher's frustration. After a scathing lecture, Mr. Brookshade walked off, leaving Ryu fuming.

While walking to the class...

"Why is it always because of you that I get into trouble?!" Ryu snapped, shaking Aido's shoulder.

Aido rubbed his eyes and yawned. "Relax, you'll live."

Before Ryu could stop himself, he swung a fist. Aido, caught off guard, blocked poorly, and Ryu's punch grazed his cheek. The entire class, which had been quietly watching the scene, gasped in unison.

Ryu froze, his anger replaced with instant regret. "Oh no... Aido, I—I'm so sorry!"

Aido straightened up, touching his cheek where a small red mark was already forming. He shrugged. "No big deal. Just don't punch me next time."

Whole class was watching but no one seemed to care much. A classmate who sits next to both blockheads nudged Ryu. "You better get him to the nurse's office before Mr. Brookshade sees that."

The Nurse's Office

The nurse's office smelled faintly of herbs and antiseptic. Nurse Viola Dawnstone gave Ryu a knowing look as she used healing magic to soothe Aido's cheek. Aido leaned back in the chair, looking as if he might doze off again. Meanwhile, Ryu sat by the window, lost in thought.

He gazed out at the horizon. The sight of students practicing magic in the courtyard below brought a pang of longing. Ryu had no magical affinity like Aido's. All he had was his determination—and his best friend's infuriating laziness to deal with.

A Walk Home

The final bell rang, signaling the end of the school day. As they walked home together, Ryu tried to convince Aido to start coming to school more regularly.

"You missed three months at the beginning of the year! You're going to fail at this rate," Ryu lectured.

Aido smirked. "Maybe I'll transfer to the magic academy. With my affinity, I'd fit right in."

Ryu rolled his eyes. "You? The weakest in the academy? Good luck with that."

"You've never seen my actual power", Aido smirks.

They both laughed, their footsteps echoing down the empty street. When they passed a vending machine, Ryu stopped to buy two cans of coffee. Handing one to Aido, he cracked his open and took a long sip.

"Caffeine is the best," Ryu said, sighing contentedly.

Aido grinned. "I could sell my soul for caffeine."

Ryu snorted, and the two dissolved into laughter. By the time they reached home, the day's chaos felt like a distant memory. Despite everything, their bond was stronger than ever.
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I mean, what is this even supposed to be?

We respect your judgement but i think you can at least give spoiler alerts .... ??

 

[aurifex]

If you're accusing us for the cover and promo shi* we'd gladly accept our mistake. But the prose thing is completely diff matter; we've put our every possible effort into it and it's 100% genuine.

About your accusations :

> the grammar can be improved if your language is good and if you have friends to talk to in that language.
>for the strong words or rather i would say new words and words that fit the sentence can always be found by looking for the synonyms in your dictionary or anywhere that doesn't matter
>and for the rest complaints, the logic you're speaking of only applies when there's a single writer writing his novel but for 2 writers they can always correct each other's blunders and cover up for that and that's what you call coordination in this field.



Anyways! I don't like to argue at all so if you're going to continue this ... I don't give a shi*

but if you wanna be our friend to guide us we are more than happy to accept that kind gesture of yours

(Don't take it to heart coz many times when I don't use emojis in my text they feel like I'm being all harsh and serious but I'm actually not, at least not at the moment)

That's all i have to say; now then, if you'll excuse me !

the cover doesn't matter, 80% of popular web novel covers are AI. it's basically the default these days.
the AI-written promotion post was cringe but not morally offensive.

look man, I write fiction for a full time living. I've been analyzing amateur works and giving feedback on them since before AI was remotely usable. i know what amateur fiction looks like. you're such a newbie you didn't even really understand what I meant about awkward sentence constructions and poor flow, which are endemic to amateur writing. you're such a beginner you don't realize how obvious it is. those sentences are 100% chatbot sentences.

i'll give you the highest possible benefit of the doubt: maybe you wrote the rough draft yourself and sent it to some chatbot saying "Fix the writing, please!" or some shit. You and your "friend"—I bet it's just you on two accounts tbh, but maybe not—did not write this prose.

Apparently the people who use this forum can't tell, which is pretty sad, but even a moderately experienced writer could. I have 0 doubts at all. It's not even an edge case. that shit came from a chatbot

 

[Ryudo_xd]

I don't think you can, lest you have it removed by contacting the admin @Tony .

Well, whatever. I don't want to get too technical with stuff, nor give another explanation why I offered free stuff. You believe your words; I believe mine.

Have a great day, peeps. ??

Ayt, whenever you're ready. I'm just helping people. Rest assured I'm not one of those who downvoted your work.

i really wanna know bout how y'all do that .....

the cover doesn't matter, 80% of popular web novel covers are AI. it's basically the default these days.
the AI-written promotion post was cringe but not morally offensive.

look man, I write fiction for a full time living. I've been analyzing amateur works and giving feedback on them since before AI was remotely usable. i know what amateur fiction looks like. you're such a newbie you didn't even really understand what I meant about awkward sentence constructions and poor flow, which are endemic to amateur writing. you're such a beginner you don't realize how obvious it is. those sentences are 100% chatbot sentences.

i'll give you the highest possible benefit of the doubt: maybe you wrote the rough draft yourself and sent it to some chatbot saying "Fix the writing, please!" or some shit. You and your "friend"—I bet it's just you on two accounts tbh, but maybe not—did not write this prose.

Apparently the people who use this forum can't tell, which is pretty sad, but even a moderately experienced writer could. I have 0 doubts at all. It's not even an edge case. that shit came from a chatbot

Believe whatever you want. I've said my part and I don't need to explain again and again, coz ik that what I wrote was completely our collaborative effort and none of AI's work

 

[aurifex]

Oh no! Better not let aurifex see this. His World may be warped when a reader actually knows how to read

It's genuinely comical you read lines like

Ryu snorted, and the two dissolved into laughter. By the time they reached home, the day's chaos felt like a distant memory. Despite everything, their bond was stronger than ever.

And don't instantly know it's chatgpt

My "World" isn't being warped in the slightest. I'm just growing more and more disappointed in the regulars of this forum.

 

[Paul__Michaels]

It's genuinely comical you read lines like

And don't instantly know it's chatgpt

My "World" isn't being warped in the slightest. I'm just growing more and more disappointed in the regulars of this forum.

Well first of all, I made The comment before I noticed that you actually responded in here. But since the cat's out a bag.

I appreciate you being the arbiter of everything here. It's so good to have an Multi-Million viewed author grace us with his presence. And yes, I know that he used an AI to create the Tread yesterday, but I like to take a dip into their actual work sometimes to see if they used AI to create rest of their story. That's why it's got kind of surprised when it wasn't and I saw the Co-Author thing.

And you like to keep saying that you don't care about this but yet you keep responding. It's almost like you're entitled. But what do I know.

I'll be looking forward to your snarky comment

 

[aurifex]

I appreciate you being the arbiter of everything here. It's so good to have an Multi-Million viewed author grace us with his presence.

why do you keep bringing this up? It's not like I'm going around every thread and spamming this—YOU are. take your weird complex somewhere else. if you want to debate a topic, debate it. I won't ever go "i have more views than you so I'm right". super weird energy

That's why it's got kind of surprised when it wasn't

it is. are you serious? he's just lying. the writing is so, sooo, soooooo obviously ai

And you like to keep saying that you don't care about this but yet you keep responding

because he's responding to me. so I'm responding to him. that's how a forum works
and I said i DID care about how "readers" can't tell AI from human, which is the clear throughline of every post of mine...

It's almost like you're entitled.

do you... do you know what entitled means? in what way am I acting entitled? entitled to what? there are so many insults you could use on a raging asshole and you picked one that doesn't even apply.

 

[Paul__Michaels]

Look everyone. He did it! He couldn't resist

Oh, you are so butt hurt. I don't really don't understand how someone could be so easily angered but you know what, you made my day aurifex.

I can understand why you don't have your work attached to this alt account.
Anyways that was all good fun.