Writing Any Tips for Writing MC's Interactions?

[Erysion]

I'm writing another book. The book starts with the MC dying because of being beheaded. Vive le France!

Instead of going to Hell/Brazil/Philipphines (or wherever people with more sins than good deeds ends up) our MC wakes up in the past as a maid.

Her past self, the beheaded queen is still around. Our MC's goal is to survive and save her past self (preventing her from becoming Mami Tomoe) if she can. The problem? The king holds interest in our MC (the maid) and our MC still love him. This doesn't amuse her past self.

How do I write their interaction and does this count as NTR?

 

[APieceOfRock]

Absolutely not NTR. It's a different consciousness I assume so it's okay.

Also yeah... just talk to yourself in the mirror. The MC (maid) can use her knowledge on herself to rile up // butter up to the Queen depending on what the situation requires. Basically the maid should be the one taking the lead on the conversation (except for when she really shouldn't since the Queen is still the Queen.). Also there's a lot of potential for blackmail but I wouldn't recommend blackmailing your own Queen.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

(or wherever people with more sins than good deeds ends up)

Uryupinsk.

does this count as NTR?

No.

 

[AnonUnlimited]

She is NTR her past self.