Another Generous Feedback Thread

[AdOtherwise]

Here's the deal. I skim through your story, be as nice as possible with honest feedback and critique, and you sleep at night with miserable thoughts about your writing (maybe).

I also have a great borderwall.
1. I will NOT read SMUT.
2. I will NOT read BL, GL, or GB. NO EXCEPTIONS (unless it hasn't appeared in the story yet).
3. Referencing from Sailus' thread, choose where you want me to review your story on: DM, commenting, thread reply, etc, default is thread reply.
4. BTW, no fan fictions.

This is obvious, but post the link to your webnovel, too.

I'm a kind, encouraging angle. So I'll, by default, be kind. You get to pick how honest I'll be; ranges from kindly honest, or brutally honest. Happy writing!

P.S. Don't expect me to skim through all ten of your chapters, lol. Additionally, I made this because there aren't many YUGE feedback threads, and I feel bad for other authors' new works getting ignored blatantly.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Thanks in advance

Webnovel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lowly-ascent_26093747205010905###

 

[seahorsepink1]

isn’t GB “Girl-Boy”?

GB is gender-bender lol

 

[ThatTwat3000]

GB is gender-bender lol

oh my, I guess I can see why you guys were questioning me

 

[shadowniy]

if any one just finding out gb is gender bender i am sorry for this cursed but helpful knowledge stay informed and stay protected people

 

[ATTICLover]

Here's the deal. I skim through your story, be as nice as possible with honest feedback and critique, and you sleep at night with miserable thoughts about your writing (maybe).

I also have a great borderwall.
1. I will NOT read SMUT.
2. I will NOT read BL, GL, or GB. NO EXCEPTIONS (unless it hasn't appeared in the story yet).
3. Referencing from Sailus' thread, choose where you want me to review your story on: DM, commenting, thread reply, etc, default is thread reply.
4. BTW, no fan fictions.

This is obvious, but post the link to your webnovel, too.

I'm a kind, encouraging angle. So I'll, by default, be kind. You get to pick how honest I'll be; ranges from kindly honest, or brutally honest. Happy writing!

P.S. Don't expect me to skim through all ten of your chapters, lol. Additionally, I made this because there aren't many YUGE feedback threads, and I feel bad for other authors' new works getting ignored blatantly.

Symphonia: Rebel Against the World of Machines and the Sleepless Cities of Rhythms! | Royal Road

"The night city is always glimmering with life isn't it? Millions of lights, all of them feels alive at night and they pulse their heart for one reason. It's Music!" -Martin Forth, The Soundtrack of Defiance (3rd Live Concert ver.) The Musical Revolution had began after the rumor of an ancient...

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Well here's mine. Though you cannot see the full premise of what I'm trying to write yet because I'm writing a prologue so I'm still cooking up how I'm going to integrate that last half in my synopsis before I start the actual story. Thanks

 

[Nevafrost]

isn’t GB “Girl-Boy”?

It means Gender Bender

 

[ThatTwat3000]

It means Gender Bender

OP had been talking about Boy’s Love and Girl’s Love, so I’d thought they’d continued with the theme

 

[Nevafrost]

OP had been talking about Boy’s Love and Girl’s Love, so I’d thought they’d continued with the theme

Haha, it’s not just you. I had the same confusion long ago.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Overpowered Witch Reincarnation

I died. Then, I was reborn in a forest surrounded by monsters. The only logical thing that any sane person would do at that point is to train their magic for a thousand years. However! The forest became lonely, so I decided to go on an adventure! What to expect?...

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No comments. Review in thread. Toast this witch to oblivion if you must.

 

[ArvinMateo23]

Hello! ?
Good afternoon! (I might be wrong, Sorry)
It would my pleasure if you were to read my writing!

I am currently 19, and, a newbie, but still had fun writing this story regardless!

Would it be ok for you to read it and give it a brutally honest critique or feedback.

A Former Slave, Now in Heaven

Greetings there, I am Velvn and I am now in heaven, However when I died, I died a Slave. It is now the Modern era I find it strange that i didn't immediately go to heaven after my death The era i lived through is of that of the Kings...

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This is a story setting place in HEAVEN

 

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

Greetings, I request feedback and general advice for a beginner effort from yours truly.

Any help/guidance will also be very appreciated.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096576/son-of-the-sun/

 

[LoneQuack]

I would really appreciate some feedback. It's my first time writing so I would appreciate it a lot. Please comment on the chapter when you have the time to read my story, and I hope you enjoy it!

Thread of Fate

Fate is a funny word. People love to play with its meaning and its applications. Some call it destiny, others call it inevitable, and a few tend to accompany it with worlds that give it direction. ‘Thread of Fate’ – ah, if fate were a thread, what would that mean? What...

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[TakeoMasaki]

Here's the deal. I skim through your story, be as nice as possible with honest feedback and critique, and you sleep at night with miserable thoughts about your writing (maybe).

I also have a great borderwall.
1. I will NOT read SMUT.
2. I will NOT read BL, GL, or GB. NO EXCEPTIONS (unless it hasn't appeared in the story yet).
3. Referencing from Sailus' thread, choose where you want me to review your story on: DM, commenting, thread reply, etc, default is thread reply.
4. BTW, no fan fictions.

This is obvious, but post the link to your webnovel, too.

I'm a kind, encouraging angle. So I'll, by default, be kind. You get to pick how honest I'll be; ranges from kindly honest, or brutally honest. Happy writing!

P.S. Don't expect me to skim through all ten of your chapters, lol. Additionally, I made this because there aren't many YUGE feedback threads, and I feel bad for other authors' new works getting ignored blatantly.

If you're interested in a Sci Fi Thriller, here is my story:

The Network

'The Network' is a gripping sci-fi thriller that propels Niko Tesic from a struggling nanomedicine researcher into the heart of a top-secret government project. Unearthed from a mysterious alien artifact, advanced nanorobots hold the potential to revolutionize medicine. However, it also harbors...

www.scribblehub.com