In a harsh world where countless races and types of living beings exist, there will always be those who seek the extermination of one of them. Our hero is one of these, but his goal is not the same as most.
The synopsis is more like a plot summary, without any emotional appeal to potential readers.
Please transform your synopsis into the emotional experience promised in your story.
You can use the following synopsis formula (typically used in commercial novels):
Relatable character identity (to the reader) + main conflict + stakes + threat/challenge.
So, your synopsis will serve as a
hook to make the reader feel compelled to care about your story.
The title is too abstract. I misread it as winter. You could add a subtitle to explain the title. Please read the following thread:
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Story content and storytelling... no comments. I haven't read your chapter yet.
Dunno why you choose to use – for every characters dialogue, its a super turn off for me thats why i skim read it.
That's a French style of dialogue. But it's not good when applied to English.
