Horizon209
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- Dec 16, 2021
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My story has no harem, my mc isn't beta or a coward, and I tend to make my mc, not op. Though my FMC is quite annoying in early chapters. Some early chapters are wonky in grammar and my readers tend to be confused about what's happening. I edited some of them of course. I also have a single review that praises the story and nothing else. I know I made some kind of mistake somewhere. Any advice?