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Quest Code Index update and completed. All quest inputted



For the codes of Scrible I change it for future proofing reason, also to match the other regions.

SC0003 - RegioncodeLevelReqQuestNumber

I am happy to change the codes already posted on the Quest page, but that means I'd need GM access. So one of you will have to do it or just ignore it. (I am happy to ignore it)

Alternatively if you want the index to match the forum, I can change the codes pretty quickly, its just a matter of changing one value and dragging it across the cells. Takes 2 secs.
 

Alma

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writers of AG, do you have any guide to write a coherent story?
 

Alma

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Define what you mean by coherent.
'-'
I mean, are you wanting advice on character development?
Plot flow in a quest?
Sentence structure?
Something else?

*is asking so she doesn't go off saying stuff with no relevance*
>w<

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All of them? my story feel weird honestly.
 

Nahrenne

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All of them? my story feel weird honestly.
Hmm...
*thinks*

I guess you could make a rough plan of what you intend for your character.
- Like, how far do you see them getting before dying (since I imagine that will be a plot point for your character due to not being able to fully die)
- How do you want your character to grow in terms of skills?
- How do you want your character to grow as a person?
- Do you want to introduce new NPCs that you'll keep using that other people would be able to use?
- What kind of quests do you want your character to do? Fighting ones, or non-fighting ones?
Etc...

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Hmm...
*thinks*

I guess you could make a rough plan of what you intend for your character.
- Like, how far do you see them getting before dying (since I imagine that will be a plot point for your character due to not being able to fully die)
- How do you want your character to grow in terms of skills?
- How do you want your character to grow as a person?
- Do you want to introduce new NPCs that you'll keep using that other people would be able to use?
- What kind of quests do you want your character to do? Fighting ones, or non-fighting ones?
Etc...

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Or you can just do what i do and make up things along the way.:blob_hide:
 

Alma

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weird in what way?
1. Too many dialogue. 2. word choice (I don't get the concept of character voice, honestly. I thought it was just how they speak, but my dialogue felt lacking and artificial). 3. plot structure. Exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, conclusion. I feel like, what I write don't even have that structure. It feels flat.
 

Alma

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Well... from what I have read in others, their story felt like it is flowing. While mine felt like it is too stiff.
 
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