Gah! They're everywhere!!!Don't worry, we're shipping them for weeks now~
Gah! They're everywhere!!!Don't worry, we're shipping them for weeks now~
Ah, then everything's fine ^^Don't worry, we're shipping them for weeks now~
Ah, then everything's fine ^^
Don't worry I wasn't going to join them
Comrade!Don't worry I wasn't going to join them
Never!
Love is in the air~
When can we expect the wedding?
'Never' has 5 letters.Never!![]()
Ehehehehehehhee~Gah! They're everywhere!!!![]()
Love is in the air~
When can we expect the wedding?
'Never' has 5 letters.
So it's hinting that by the end of the fifth letter between Cassel and Felicia, they'll be married!![]()
I will just watch yourComrade!![]()
Oh, snap... I forgot to tell you that Alice is a magical girl of LOVE and justice for a reasonGah! They're everywhere!!!![]()
Define what you mean by coherent.writers of AG, do you have any guide to write a coherent story?
All of them? my story feel weird honestly.Define what you mean by coherent.
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I mean, are you wanting advice on character development?
Plot flow in a quest?
Sentence structure?
Something else?
*is asking so she doesn't go off saying stuff with no relevance*
>w<
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weird in what way?my story feel weird honestly.
Hmm...All of them? my story feel weird honestly.
Or you can just do what i do and make up things along the way.Hmm...
*thinks*
I guess you could make a rough plan of what you intend for your character.
- Like, how far do you see them getting before dying (since I imagine that will be a plot point for your character due to not being able to fully die)
- How do you want your character to grow in terms of skills?
- How do you want your character to grow as a person?
- Do you want to introduce new NPCs that you'll keep using that other people would be able to use?
- What kind of quests do you want your character to do? Fighting ones, or non-fighting ones?
Etc...
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1. Too many dialogue. 2. word choice (I don't get the concept of character voice, honestly. I thought it was just how they speak, but my dialogue felt lacking and artificial). 3. plot structure. Exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, conclusion. I feel like, what I write don't even have that structure. It feels flat.weird in what way?