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Haku45

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I would like to get answers to several questions. I have my own opinion on them, but it’s always interesting to know someone else’s opinion

1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
11. KFC or MacDonalds?
 
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Kalliel

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1. When I feel like the story can reach a satisfying conclusion.
2. I don't think I have.
3. Some clearly don't.
4. I have certainly not created a milking monster.
5. Keep writing. I often focus on relatability for the protagonist more.
6. I'll create a new one, seeing that I am too lazy to do research.
7. ...?
8. Yes, I have. I'll create excuses for it, most of the time.
9. One out of three is.
10. All of them are.
11. Neither. My country doesn't have both.
 

RepresentingWrath

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I would like to get answers to several questions. I have my own opinion on them, but it’s always interesting to know someone else’s opinion

1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
4. When you design a milking monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
11. KFC or MacDonalds?
1. I have endings.
2. So far I did not kill good characters.
3. No. Explain.
4. I rely on extra thicc dark elf girls with wide hips.
5. Slap myself.
6. I will.
8. Not sure I get what you mean. Like, was there moments when I notice a plothole? Yes.
9. Yesn't.
10. Yes.
11. McD.
 

Haku45

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1. When I feel like the story can reach a satisfying conclusion.
2. I don't think I have.
3. Some clearly don't.
4. I have certainly not created a milking monster.
5. Keep writing. I often focus on relatability for the protagonist more.
6. I'll create a new one, seeing that I am too lazy to do research.
7. ...?
8. Yes, I have. I'll create excuses for it, most of the time.
9. One out of three is.
10. All of them are.
11. Neither. My country doesn't have both.
My homies hate 7. And milking monster?
 

MatchaChocolate69

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1. Good question, does anyone know the answer? I need it too. Seriously though, there are different types of stories. Generally, the MC starts with an internal and/or external conflict. When they manage to resolve it, that's the moment to end the story.
2. Because death is a fundamental aspect of our lives, and it's interesting to see how characters react to it.
3. I like the idea of eternal hell. Perhaps not all crimes can be forgiven, however, if one seeks forgiveness, it is not in vain to do penance and suffer for one's sins.
4. What is a milking monster? In general, I seek inspiration.
5. I work on the character to make them more interesting. Or I kill off the others.
6. Both.
8. Sometimes it happens, especially in a serialized novel. The only way is to work hard to make everything fit together. Sometimes this can improve the overall plot.
9. Nope.
10. They will take it.
11. Burger King
 

Haku45

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3. No. Explain.
Eternal hell is good as punishment. But after a while, will the sinner remember why he got here? What if, due to eternal torture, he stopped thinking like a person. Why then continue to torture him? Temporary heaven is the reward for a good life. But not forever. After a certain time they will return to life forgetting about it. And the cycle will continue again. Which interpretation is more interesting to you?
 
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1. When the story is over and reaches a conclusion.

2. Why not? Good people die, so they can also die in stories. Killing off characters is one way to make stakes.

3. People can be forgiven, but I don’t know if it’s a right. Also, I don’t believe in either of those things.

4. What is a milking monster? Sometimes for monsters I use what has been created before, and other times, I make my own.

5. I will make them more interesting. You know what makes a character interesting? Flaws and interests. If they can evoke some emotion in the reader, they will be interesting even if the reader hates them.

6. As in my real life, my stories don’t focus on religion. There are seldomly even gods mentioned or talked about, besides brief instances in OP Witch.

7. ??? Profit?

8. I am not sure of many inconsistencies, but if people pointed them out, I’d correct them.

9. Only one of my MCs is a virgin.

10. Two of them are, and one isn’t.

11. I don’t really care for either, but if I had to choose one… Bleh, I guess McD
 

Haku45

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Bruh I type fucking milking monster. Bruh
Sorry for that my bad
1. When I feel like the story can reach a satisfying conclusion.
2. I don't think I have.
3. Some clearly don't.
4. I have certainly not created a milking monster.
5. Keep writing. I often focus on relatability for the protagonist more.
6. I'll create a new one, seeing that I am too lazy to do research.
7. ...?
8. Yes, I have. I'll create excuses for it, most of the time.
9. One out of three is.
10. All of them are.
11. Neither. My country doesn't have both.
Now I get what you mean in 4. My mistake
 

RepresentingWrath

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Eternal hell is good as punishment. But after a while, will the sinner remember why he got here? What if, due to eternal torture, he stopped thinking like a person. Why then continue to torture him? Temporary heaven is the reward for a good life. But not forever. After a certain time they will return to life forgetting about it. And the cycle will continue again. Which interpretation is more interesting to you?
None.
 

Dieter

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1. I wouldn't know, I've never finished a story.
2. Sometimes nothing bad happening to a character condemns them to irrelevance (a fate worse than death).
3.
4. If I make a monster, I jus try to make sure it's not just another flavor of another I've alr created. Same through-process creating characters, etc.
5. If your MC is uninteresting, its cus he's just a walking cameraman, or you've made him resemble too much of a real human being.
6. As far as religions go in fantasy stories, its just whatever your fancy takes you.
7. (7 where?)
8. I can't ignore a plot hole even if I wanted to. the band-aid fix I use is to be vague about said scene and move on (not the same as ignoring the problem. Being vague about a scene so that the plot-hole is bypassed actually takes some brain-power to be plausible/hidden)
9. Yea...
10. depends on which story.
11. Trump's favorite.
 

KoyukiMegumi

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1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
I always have my ending before I know the story's start.
2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
Emotional growth and impact.
3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
Yes, everyone has the right to forgiveness and redemption. Now, its different to forget than to forgive.
4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
There are too many monsters to pick off to make anything original, in my opinion. Why create when there is a source of choices? You can customize it to your needs. Aka Vampires who can walk in the sun and aren't allergic to garlic.
5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
Eh, there is always someone better. That doesn't mean MC shouldn't be interesting. It's their story after all.
6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
I just morph it into what I need. Same as the creature question.
8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
Yes, no plot holes per se, but I have to rewrite it to make it fit in. Or perhaps I was to vague at the start.
9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
Most of the time, yes. Until they aren't. Hahah!
10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
Without them, there wouldn't be a story to tell.
11. KFC or MacDonalds?
Popeyes!
 

Thraben

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I would like to get answers to several questions. I have my own opinion on them, but it’s always interesting to know someone else’s opinion

1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
11. KFC or MacDonalds?

1. When I can no longer gain anything creatively or skillfully from continuing it.
2. I believe the 'don't kill characters with good potential' schtick is a blight upon inexperienced authors. A character having so much more interesting stuff to do if they live is why killing them can be so gripping, poignant, and interesting.
3. No one has the 'right' to any subjective judgements from another person, all moral structures are fundamentally arbitrary in the face of humans being social animals and behaving like social animals.
4. Strange to say it out loud, but I think of how I'd design its mechanics as a homebrew D&D 3.5e monster, then how I'd describe it, then I work backwards to write it into a story.
5. Elaboration of question needed, it is too vague for me to know what is being asked.
6. Religion exists in three stages of human development: In the pre-government pre-scientific age, religion just needs to explain the way world works in a way that satisfies the common man (Citation: ancient Greek religions, ancient Mesopotamian religions, etc.). In the governed pre-scientific age, existing religions are tools used for the political expediency, and if no existing religions work, new ones will be made to work or old ones will be changed to work (Citation: Christianity). In the governed scientific age, religion's political expediency slowly diminishes, and with its loss of social utility, it must desperately cling to the first stage's utility, explaining the way the world works to people who now could learn better, but haven't for some reason.
7. Yes. No. No. Oftentimes, unless you have some specific reason to go back and edit every meticulous detail, letting stuff like that simply sit where it is will make it easier to remember not to make the same mistakes, since you'll have a sitting example of what not to do.
8. I always assume my protagonists aren't unless there's a specific reason for me to assume they are. Statistically, 12-15% of adult humans are virgins, and I see no reason why this wouldn't be true in my settings.
9. 50/50. Some protagonists explicitly will unintentionally change or want to change the world they live in, but I also like writing protagonists who are utterly irrelevant to the scope of their setting.
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Sagacious_Punk

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1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
When I reach the ending. Because I figure it out beforehand. Weak stories with strong endings are always better than strong stories with weak endings. Ende gut, alles gut, as the German proverb goes.

2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
Because that is their fate within this story. On a grander, cosmic scale, this is how their life was meant to play out - for it is the accumulation of life choices that led them to this point.

Bonus points if it happens during a dramatically appropriate moment. Which is every time, when I wield the narrative quill.

3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
Yes to the first question. In fact, one of my books features redemption as a central theme.

To the second question, in my worldview nothing is eternal except Eternity itself. (Yes, that may seem like a self-referencing logic - which it is, but only in half; that's the paradox.) Sooner or later everything ends - although the universe itself is also eternal*. Another paradox.

*(Don't @ me about heat death and the eventual dissolution of fundamental forces. This is another layer of discussion.)

4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
Haven't designed enough original monsters at this point to have created any recognizable pattern to my workflow.

5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
Most probably nothing. Depends on my goal as a writer - whether I want the protag to feel like a "vehicle" for the reader, or to be a distinctive individual on their own.

Also "interesting" is an umbrella term that could mean any number of things to any number of people. I find characters interesting when they are intelligent, capable, and proactive; or when they stand their ground even when facing overwhelming odds; or when they are well-reasoned and apply common sense constantly. Etc. And I'm sure plenty of people will say the opposite, or something different altogether. You need to narrow down the definition of "interesting" with more concrete parameters.

6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
"Inventing" religions is way, wayyy more difficult than it sounds. Ask anyone who's even remotely knowledgeable about theology. In short, if you want a religion for your story/wold, pick one from real life, file the numbers off, and put a fresh coat of pain on top. Every conceivable religion you can think of already exists or has existed at some point.

"Buddhism" alone is a modern term (~300 old) that puts about 15 000 different schools of thought into a single religious category. Christianity alone has several thousand different sects. Ditto for the myths and religion of ancient societies like Sumerians and Egyptians.

Just pick one (or several) and put your own twist. Everyone sees faith a little differently. I personally put Dudeism verbatim in TCW among several other, less obvious religions.

8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
That always happens. It's part of writing. At some point either your character(s) or the story itself will come inevitably at odds between them or with some other structuro-narrative element. That's why editing exists.

Personally, I try to pre-plan my stories as best I can, to keep those occurrences to a minimum.

9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
Hmm. Two of my protagonists start as virgins in their respective stories, but they lose that "status" rather quickly, haha. A few side characters also began without any intimate life experience, but they also learned their ways in due time. I guess I'm a sexually libertarian writer. xD

In my older writings, I haven't given any thought about the intimate life of my characters, so you can assume for them "it depends".

10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
Hmm (x2). In general, yes. I'm not very fond of writing characters that aren't larger-than-life. That said, I have planned a few stories where that's not the case.

On a tangent, this can be considered a trick question, since any protagonist(s) can be considered important for "the world", which in this context can mean the world of the story itself. Unless you're writing postmodern fiction. Please don't write postmodern fiction. There are enough pretentious bastards out there already.

11. KFC or MacDonalds?
PizzaLab. ;)
 
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Verdant

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I would like to get answers to several questions. I have my own opinion on them, but it’s always interesting to know someone else’s opinion

1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
11. KFC or MacDonalds?
1. It truly depends on the genre, for action; I would say when the main characters get too strong and face little challenges from anything power-related. That or a new era of the world peace begins.
2. I thought I would have done this but didn’t. Found a better role..
3. Everyone has the right to forgiveness, or the at the very least, being put in prison.
4. Usually 50% based of a reference or idea. I typically use systems for this so kind of original? Kind of not?
5. Make them more interesting.
6. Religion is a subject I don’t like dealing with but if I did, it would be newly made (with some inspirations from niche cultures)
8. Rewritten chapters, but in my case, it’s bullet points I’ve rewritten.
9. Probably? I don’t think about this stuff ever lol.
10. Technically? They’re completely the protagonist but it’s the combined aid of their friends that make them important to the world.
11. Dairy Queen.
I always have my ending before I know the story's start.

Emotional growth and impact.

Yes, everyone has the right to forgiveness and redemption. Now, its different to forget than to forgive.

There are too many monsters to pick off to make anything original, in my opinion. Why create when there is a source of choices? You can customize it to your needs. Aka Vampires who can walk in the sun and aren't allergic to garlic.

Eh, there is always someone better. That doesn't mean MC shouldn't be interesting. It's their story after all.

I just morph it into what I need. Same as the creature question.

Yes, no plot holes per se, but I have to rewrite it to make it fit in. Or perhaps I was to vague at the start.

Most of the time, yes. Until they aren't. Hahah!

Without them, there wouldn't be a story to tell.

Popeyes!
1. Is so relatable
1. When I can no longer gain anything creatively or skillfully from continuing it.
2. I believe the 'don't kill characters with good potential' schtick is a blight upon inexperienced authors. A character having so much more interesting stuff to do if they live is why killing them can be so gripping, poignant, and interesting.
3. No one has the 'right' to any subjective judgements from another person, all moral structures are fundamentally arbitrary in the face of humans being social animals and behaving like social animals.
4. Strange to say it out loud, but I think of how I'd design its mechanics as a homebrew D&D 3.5e monster, then how I'd describe it, then I work backwards to write it into a story.
5. Elaboration of question needed, it is too vague for me to know what is being asked.
6. Religion exists in three stages of human development: In the pre-government pre-scientific age, religion just needs to explain the way world works in a way that satisfies the common man (Citation: ancient Greek religions, ancient Mesopotamian religions, etc.). In the governed pre-scientific age, existing religions are tools used for the political expediency, and if no existing religions work, new ones will be made to work or old ones will be changed to work (Citation: Christianity). In the governed scientific age, religion's political expediency slowly diminishes, and with its loss of social utility, it must desperately cling to the first stage's utility, explaining the way the world works to people who now could learn better, but haven't for some reason.
7. Yes. No. No. Oftentimes, unless you have some specific reason to go back and edit every meticulous detail, letting stuff like that simply sit where it is will make it easier to remember not to make the same mistakes, since you'll have a sitting example of what not to do.
8. I always assume my protagonists aren't unless there's a specific reason for me to assume they are. Statistically, 12-15% of adult humans are virgins, and I see no reason why this wouldn't be true in my settings.
9. 50/50. Some protagonists explicitly will unintentionally change or want to change the world they live in, but I also like writing protagonists who are utterly irrelevant to the scope of their setting.
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I agree a lot with 3.
 
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Kekw

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I would like to get answers to several questions. I have my own opinion on them, but it’s always interesting to know someone else’s opinion

1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
11. KFC or MacDonalds?
1. When im tired
2. Because at that point theyve reached their max potential and there isnt any more characterisation that can be done, Nobara from JJK is a good example of this
3. No
4. When I design a monster in my head I dont like consulting the traditional bullshit found in normal mangas like orcs or wolves or goblins or whatever. Its much better to introduce an entirely new horrifying monster that seems like its out of Elden Ring

Make it as horrifying as possible and enable readers to realise why this monster somehow hasnt been wiped out yet

You see slimes in the usual isekai novels? Theyre pretty shit, low level mob, how are they not gone yet?

Simply upgrade the lethality, make them bigger, make them faster, make it so that they jump from place to place at lightning speeds and they can shoot out acid bolts that instantly melt people.

Another word of advice I can give you is to have the same questions for factions as well though.

5. Give him character arcs or make him learn life lessons from other characters, of course there are simply cases where you can do nothing such as the case with Gojo Satoru or Levi Ackerman, but it is what it is.

6. I am not the best in this regard, because in my novel the two religions that are mainly featured are basically just fantasy christianity and fantasy islam. One thing I do keep in mind however is that there needs to be something about the religion that actually compels the people to worship the God

One reason why Christianity overtook the old pagan faiths is simply because it was a faith catered to the believer, put yourself in the shoes of a Greek wherein you have degenerates like Zeus and the Olympian pantheon being your deities. They actually DO NOT give a shit about you, and here comes christianity wherein the priests advertise a God that unconditionally loves all and protects everyone and is basically a father to all, basically its the difference between talking to a powerful parent vs talking to a tornado

Best to keep in mind though is that my style of writing is a bit different in the way that I keep asking myself "Why would X do Y" because I absolutely despise plot holes however, so it may be best to disregard this if you're writing casually.

7. Where the fuck is 7?

8. If I do this I would usually simply retcon it and post an update in the next chapter that comes out.

9. Yes because she is female and a lot of SH readers are males so its not the best idea to actually give them multiple male romance partners, much less male partners hence the outstanding amount of yuri romance among female mc stories here.

10. Yes

11. No
 

Hans.Trondheim

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I would like to get answers to several questions. I have my own opinion on them, but it’s always interesting to know someone else’s opinion

1. When do you realize it’s time to end the story?
I know when my story will end, even before I wrote the first chapter. I plan my novels, see?

2. If you kill any significant good character. Why are you doing this?
Character growth. Sometimes, death is a way to develop one.

3. Do you think that everyone has the right to forgiveness? And you like the idea of eternal hell or temporary heaven. (I'll explain if someone doesn't understand)
Yes, everyone should, and can, be forgiven. Now, if someone will present to me fucked up cases of people doing fucked up things to try and prove my statement wrong, I always answer to leave it to their discretion to forgive. As for me, I forgive people for myself, so I won't be stressed and beholden to the guy who did me wrong. And yes, I believe in eternal heaven and hell.

4. When you design a monster in your head, do you rely on any source? Or are you coming up with something original?
Original as always, though with a sliver of references. After all, I have more freedom in my own creations.

5. You understand that mc is less interesting than other characters. What will you do?
Make him more interesting then. Rewrites exist for this purpose.

6. You will invent a new religion for history. Or you take an already created idea from others. (I always see the same interpretations of religion in isekai and other stuff)
Invent, though with a sliver of references.

8. Were there moments that you understand contradict the story? And if so, have you rewritten chapters with this error. Or just ignore the problem
First, I try to fix the error by explaining stuff logically. If I can't do it, that's the time I do rewrites.

9. is your mc a virgin? (don’t ask now, why am I asking)
Yes. I based him off my culture.

10. Does your mc important to the story? I mean if he important to the world
Starts off as insignificant (Volume 1). 19 books later, he's a force to be reckoned with.

11. KFC or MacDonalds?
Wendy's.
 
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