10th chapter released, story feedback needed!

GrotesqueHeaven

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Hello, today I am asking for a feedback of my story - The Island of Wonder. As stated in the name, I just published 10th chapter and now the story has 24,249 total words count.

I know it may be selfish or whatever, but I really ask for the feedback for the whole story and of not the first few chapters. But of course I welcome anything, and if you will drop the story at the half, share with me why.

In any case, thanks in advance.
 
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