🌠🌌🌟🌌🌠 Fateful Events 🌠🌌🌟🌌🌠

[DozeOfLuck]

✴⧏—✴Hi everyone, I'm DozeOfLuck (but you can call me Zyn if you want to ). I recently released my series called "Fateful Events" and would love for all of you to spread it like wildfire

*like... as in to make it go viral like I worked really hard on it and stuff and and... *

Here's the link:

Fateful Events - Fateful Events | The Introduction | Scribble Hub

www.scribblehub.com

(disclaimer: I am not seeking feedback. "But then why is the thread in the 'story feedback' section" you say? You should ask whichever one of the mods moved it instead )

And feel free to post your creations (new or otherwise) or whatever else you'd like, in the comments, if you feel like it~\(✧o✧)/

(Also if you wanna be friends: I'm really shy so you'll have to make the first move ∗︎˚(* ˃̤൬˂̤ *)˚∗︎)


Aaaaand—that's it!~


Let's begin.✴—⧐✴


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[E.Z.KAI]

Theres quite the amount of long dashes, which is like a huuuuuuge giveaway for ai.
Im not saying this is ai.
But.
Well.

 

[DozeOfLuck]

Theres quite the amount of long dashes, which is like a huuuuuuge giveaway for ai.
Im not saying this is ai.
But.
Well.

✴⧏—✴dashes are pretty✴—⧐✴
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[TheKillingAlice]

Theres quite the amount of long dashes, which is like a huuuuuuge giveaway for ai.
Im not saying this is ai.
But.
Well.

I got so confused, because you suddenly have a profile picture. I almost didn't recognize you.

Hi everyone, I'm DozeOfLuck (but you can call me Zyn if you want to ). I recently released my series called "Fateful Events" and would love for all of you to help me spread it like wildfire

*like... as in to make it go viral like I worked really hard on it and stuff and and... *

Here's the link:

Fateful Events

This is my original creation. Please do not copy, distribute and / or modify without my explicit authorization. You can share the original link. You can share any part of the story with it.

www.scribblehub.com

Anyway, that's it! Enjoy~


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Also: Feedback Section. @Eldoria?

help me spread it like wildfire​

Also, also: I had three strokes reading this, maybe this was just too much doodle and color for my black soul, but in general, if we were able to just magic novels into bestsellers, we'd be doing it ourselves. As you will likely find out soon, this Forum is made up of approximately 75 % Writers and 25 % occasional Readers who also write.
Therefore... Good Luck.

 

[E.Z.KAI]

I got so confused, because you suddenly have a profile picture. I almost didn't recognize you.

Also: Feedback Section. @Eldoria?

Also, also: I had three strokes reading this, maybe this was just too much doodle and color for my black soul, but in general, if we were able to just magic novels into bestsellers, we'd be doing it ourselves. As you will likely find out soon, this Forum is made up of approximately 75 % Writers and 25 % occasional Readers who also write.
Therefore... Good Luck.

I felt like it was about time to get one.^^ Especially since i kinda grew foud of ppl like you and some others and felt like this would make me more likely to be recognized again, after I´ve finally managed to change my Username.^^ (only a few days left!)

Also: Saaaaame!

P.S.: I wanted to ask this like forever - "Schinken". Deute ich die Verwendung dieses spezifischen Wortes korrekt?

 

[TheKillingAlice]

I felt like it was about time to get one.^^ Especially since i kinda grew foud of ppl like you and some others and felt like this would make me more likely to be recognized again, after I´ve finally managed to change my Username.^^ (only a few days left!)

Also: Saaaaame!

P.S.: I wanted to ask this like forever - "Schinken". Deute ich die Verwendung dieses spezifischen Wortes korrekt?

First of all: Congratz! I will then definitely only recognize you, when you keep this profile picture long enough for my brain to get a feel for your name. My recognition engine runs on MS Paint and curdled milk.

In case you interpreted as a reference to a bygone era of YouTube, Coldmirror, and my undying love of juicy ham, yes, indeed. Schinken.

 

[E.Z.KAI]

Thanks! I'll keep it. It kinda fits pretty well.

Ah nice! Relatable! Snape, i mean Schinken, my love, always.

 

[TheKillingAlice]

Thanks! I'll keep it. It kinda fits pretty well.

Ah nice! Relatable! Snape, i mean Schinken, my love, always.

Great.

Exactly. Fresh Dumbledore is definitely king tho.

 

[E.Z.KAI]

Great.

Exactly. Fresh Dumbledore is definitely king tho.

Auf die Kompostis!

 

[TheKillingAlice]

Auf die Kompostis!

Or good old ones, "Natürlich ist auch Harrys Eule Hermine dabei!" - It never gets old.

 

[DozeOfLuck]

I got so confused, because you suddenly have a profile picture. I almost didn't recognize you.

Also: Feedback Section. @Eldoria?

Also, also: I had three strokes reading this, maybe this was just too much doodle and color for my black soul, but in general, if we were able to just magic novels into bestsellers, we'd be doing it ourselves. As you will likely find out soon, this Forum is made up of approximately 75 % Writers and 25 % occasional Readers who also write.
Therefore... Good Luck.

✴⧏—✴I'm honestly glad and flattered to know that my creation is...heart-stopping. To some...people✴—⧐✴

✴⧏—✴and I'm not sure what you're trying to achieve with this but when did I ask for feedback?✴—⧐✴

✴⧏—✴and for general information purposes: this thread was originally posted in "general chat" (where it belongs, in my opinion). just saying.✴—⧐✴​

 

[TheKillingAlice]

And I'm not sure what you're trying to achieve with this but when did I ask for feedback?​

Hmmmmmmm, in that case, I'm not sure what you are trying to achieve.
I honestly summoned @Eldoria because I was unsure of what to make of your post, but still doesn't feel like a fit for the general chat.
Anywhoms, what I said is exactly what I meant: Most of the people here aren't even reading that much and almost all of us have stories. If we could even "help" making something "blow up", we'd constantly do so, but that's just not how it is. I gave you a reality check.
And your story doesn't even have a synopsis. Your cover, though also no proper cover, still tells me more about your story than your "Synopsis" – which is a copyright claim – and the title of the story together, mainly because it gives a hint on the fact that it's about something-something in space.
From what I remember, there were five chapters, out of which three were fat litter (stuff that can be cut out entirely). One "chapter" was a literal play list. Only two(?) were actual story. I don't know if many people on this forum will like that. I didn't. Especially since the story itself could have been the best in the world, but the bold style throughout the entire chapter, coupled with the whole body of text aligned in the center, made it annoying for me to read, so I didn't.
You may not explicitly ask for feedback. But you are asking for "us" – the Cthulhu-esque entity that is the SH Forum – to "make" your story big. I'm aware this is likely a joke, but you did try to promote your work, no? But you're promoting it to us. I'm part of that and it didn't work for me. It also didn't seem to work for @NotProudofmySmut, but I could be wrong with that assumption. However, even if we could just magic novels up into the recommended list on the front page, it would require a lot of people here to love your novel. I don't really see that coming to fruition with your fiction in its current state of existence, but that's just my two cents on the matter.
Well, as I said, with that in mind... Good Luck in your ventures. Have a cookie for trying.

 

[TheKillingAlice]

✴⧏—✴and for general information purposes: this thread was originally posted in "general chat" (where it belongs, in my opinion). just saying.✴—⧐✴

Also, because this was still open in a lost tab and I just realized it was moved to Story Feedback, I also saw you made that change. Actually, that change was made before I even posted, but I had the tab open, then went somewhere else and came back to answer without refreshing. The thing is, I made that comment about the feedback section originally, because I wasn't sure, as I stated. I'm actually shit at figuring these things out. Which is why I called upon the most trustworthy person on this forum, Eldoria, who is not a moderator to my knowledge, and would call one over if she saw it as something unfit for General Chat.
I'm actually sorry, if that came off wrong – I just felt it was placed wrongly and still feel that way. I didn't mean to make you immediately go to a Mod and have it moved. I really just questioned it.
On the other hand, since I have no clue who moved it and when: If a Moderator did move it on their own accord, it wouldn't be your place to say where it fits and where it doesn't.

 

[E.Z.KAI]

You may not explicitly ask for feedback. But you are asking for "us" – the Cthulhu-esque entity that is the SH Forum – to "make" your story big. I'm aware this is likely a joke, but you did try to promote your work, no? But you're promoting it to us. I'm part of that and it didn't work for me. It also didn't seem to work for @NotProudofmySmut, but I could be wrong with that assumption.

I mean, Dozeofluck didn´t ask for feedback, but theres also no Make my story big category either. In the end, its kinda all pointless anyway, because I´m convinced, that theres just very little Stroy traction to gain from the Forum.

 

[TheKillingAlice]

I mean, Dozeofluck didn´t ask for feedback, but theres also no Make my story big category either. In the end, its kinda all pointless anyway, because I´m convinced, that theres just very little Stroy traction to gain from the Forum.

Exactly that was my original point.
And yeah, again, I'm shit a categorizing things, so I tried relying on Eldoria. But, again, my main point was that it's just not going to work out this way. xD