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Thanks, very helpful Caught

I haven't published the novel yet, I wanted first to get it right. And don't worry it didn’t sound commanding qt all

So I been coming back to it for some reason and still isn't really sure if it hooking or boring. I would like to know outsiders opinions on where does it feel like it drags or where it seems interesting and engaging. Thank you...

Thanks a lot for the corrections, it's very helpful Good to know, thank you

I been working too long on the first chapter to the point the words litterally blur and It would really help me seeing some outside perpective. Thank you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SaswMMFH9yNSpvL0oVLLT2b0y28S_uOOWVcenQfamF4/edit?usp=drivesdk

Thank you, very insightful I'll work on it, thank you

Thank you

Hi, I would appreciate feedback for the beginning of my story, to see if it's uninteresting or unengaging. Like that, I could change it before I go too far. Thank you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MhZ6-__ZHrIDEkZWndKolcYXOZlVvzVBHttP8p03-Ow/edit#heading=h.qbaa9e1uswba

Hi, here is mine. Thank you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MhZ6-__ZHrIDEkZWndKolcYXOZlVvzVBHttP8p03-Ow/edit#heading=h.qbaa9e1uswba

Hello I'd love to receive feedback. I'll leave the draft here sorry if it's a little long https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lVYAFc5U4LtssuhxmWRpB2cjq3zVajSe1qz15PyVZWQ/edit?usp=sharing

I remember reading a log time ago a story with this concept, sadly it was dropped however I thought the idea was very cool. Is there any stories with a similar concept?

Agree, but still don't want to do shit

Thank you, helps a lot

Was planning on starting a novel, and I wanted to make sure it didn't suck. I will appreciate if someone could read at least, read a little of my old novel for their opinion so I won't commit same mistakes on my new one and also can improve the old one. Ifor the moment it has only five chapters...

Hi, if you don't mind... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/645305/mechanical-blood/ I'll appreciate it if you do it here. Thank you

I remember this one, is front a yuri hentai, I don't remember the name though

Would someone you click on this cover?

Here pls

Can I get also a free review?...Doesn't matter if it is in this thread. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/619890/archmage-me-cool/