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Thank you for reviewing it! For the Cover I didn't realize I needed to make the cover 250x350 pixels, it was originally drawn in 1920x1080 pixels and I just never bothered getting around to fixing it. For the characters, yeah I do admit that it was intentional to not give a description of...

Deal with the formatting

Thank you, I was literally going to go and remove each space but then decided to keep it in just to spite him. You know what Imma add him as a character then in a future chapter I’ll make sure he dies a brutal horrible death. But also its midnight where I am, and I can’t believe I stayed up for...

Why is it a problem?

And how is that a problem? I wrote this in google docs over the course of a year and thats what you are taking notice of?

Really? What Chapter did you read up to? What do you mean by that exactly?

It is a Isekai following a "magitech" world war 1 commander from a realistic shooter game, to a world where they are expected to fight in a sort of battle royal of species. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1163199/swords--gunpowder/

The way I wrote a story was write a very long draft like 125000 words long, pacing doesn't need to be consistent. You just need to explore the world and characters, which my draft did, then just rewrite the entire story to what you really want it to be. Discover first then rewrite it with an...

While my story is a Gender Bender it really isn’t the main focus. But still can you check out my story? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1163199/swords--gunpowder/

Thats alright, deal with real life first as its real.

I don't know how to ask for feedback, but would you give feedback on my story? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1163199/swords--gunpowder/

I'm not to sure how to ask for feedback but if you have the chance can you give feedback on my story? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1163199/swords--gunpowder/