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I really like the premise. If you're looking for more tension here, I'd recommend leaving out the internal thoughts/intentions of either of them so that the reader can be tense. Forrr example, the girl's inner conflict could be left unexplained and instead only showing her outward panic, fear...

Hey, looking for feedback on my novel: Novel Title : Folklore

Tai Thumb was a poor kid who was content with his life despite the many hardships. After all, he had a loving family who always protected and cared for him. He was happy and content until one day, everything changed. Novel Title : Folklore

You don't need to. Just get the general gist of things and maybe an interesting tidbit or two. It makes it easier to remember more at once. In other words, enjoy the novel in the moment, then forget most of it afterwards?

I just realized okay:blob_joy:

Take a look at my novel. If there's anything particular you like or dislike about it, feel free to tell me. Or you could just read it then say nothing Folklore

Novel Title : Folklore