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    Writing What makes a good intermission

    Use it to advance the plot from a different perspective. That could be done by introducing a new adversary, or setting the scene of a place the MC is about to visit. There's multiple different things you can do, but that's what comes to mind because that's what I'm currently doing as my MC is...
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    Free feedback thread. No Gl or smut, or incest. NO INCEST! (Closed)

    Thanks. It's nice to be able to step outside of what you wrote, and hear about it from another's perspective
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    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/510386/spark-of-the-revenant/ I'd like to hear your thoughts.
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    Free feedback thread. No Gl or smut, or incest. NO INCEST! (Closed)

    I'd like to hear your thoughts https://www.scribblehub.com/series/510386/spark-of-the-revenant/
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    5k words per day are too tiring.

    Good! I like the sound of people getting better, let's level up!
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/510386/spark-of-the-revenant/ I'll take the review. Sent through PM please. It'll be faster to recall
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    Looking for Things to Review

    If this is still open, I'd like to enter https://www.scribblehub.com/series/510386/spark-of-the-revenant/
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    Feedback for new sci-fi fantasy [Litrpg]

    All of that is in there, but it's after the prologue
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    Feedback for new sci-fi fantasy [Litrpg]

    I had a dream a while back while playing Cyberpunk 2077. It kept rattling around in my head until I decided to grab my MC and plug him into Google Docs. And that is how Spark of the Revenant was born. A blend between Mass effect and a dash Cyberpunk—my two favorite games. Spark of the Revenant...
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    Free Constructive Review(closed)

    I'd like to hear your thoughts. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/510386/spark-of-the-revenant/
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    I like generic. Every one likes generic, that's why it's generic lol. But I did take your feedback into account and added a few details that I believe improves it, if just a tiny bit. synopsis Dexter was playing his guitar on a beautiful summer day, when his world ended. Yet somehow he found...
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Genre: Litrpg, System apocalypse Title: The Bladed Legend by Spilled Soup This is a new story I'm working on, haven't posted it yet or anything Synopsis On a beautiful summer day, Dexter's world ended. Yet somehow he found himself in a new world that bore an eerie resemblance to one of his...
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    Writing Prompt Brainstorming ideas for future and new stories.

    Title - To raise a Demon Lord by Spilled Soup Setting - Demon realm Protagonist Type - Overprotective Single Demon Mother Protagonist Job - Raise her son to be the next Demon Lord. He's a 3yr toddler. Race - A 5'7" female Demon in her early 30s. She looks like a plump, brown haired human...
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    Writing Prompt Brainstorming ideas for future and new stories.

    The loli fans on this site need to be questioned jfc
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    NTR is not for kids

    NTR needs a fucking warning label lol. I still get nightmares from a doujin I stumbled on ten years ago. ??
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    What a surprise lol

    What a surprise lol
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    Anyone else having a bakake from sitting too long?

    Oops, I'm in the wrong thread
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    It's the first chapter, so I didn't want to bog the reader down at times y'know. But thanks for the feedback. With Bun, I was trying to portray the MC as seeing a bit of himself in her. So he sort of took her under his wing and pulled her out of her shell over the years they lived together in...
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/270968/the-lost-spark/ [Synopsis] Tension between the Guilds of the Federation and the Kingdoms of the Outer Rim, boils. Planets caught between the two find themselves scorched, stripped bare of labor and resources. On a day of celebration, Eon, a Netrunner...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/270968/the-lost-spark/ A sci-fi LitRPG cultivation story I'm working on
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