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I’d say the original mass effect trilogy has good writing, we all know about Andromeda. Horizon zero Dawn and forbidden west and dlc. Detroit become human The fact no one has said Titanfall 2 yet is absurd and the fact they are continuing the story is criminal. God of war mostly the last two...

Yeah I’d stick with people with more proven track records. I know they’re a bit of a megacorp but Amazon does have kindle and audible and several of my favorite writers who either started here or on Royalroad have had a lot of success with them.

One chapter a day until you reach 50 which is were most veteran readers actually pick up stories. After reaching 50 I recommend at the very least 3 chapters a week I recommend 5. If it’s your first story don’t be too upset if it isn’t as successful as you think. Write for you if it takes off...

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For Scribblehub the best way to release is daily the number in question is up to you but since you have only 50 chapters I would recommend once a day until you’re caught up. I wouldn’t recommend doing a large dump at all. Most experienced SH users don’t read stories until Ch 50 because we know...

Be more concerned with views and ratings. Honestly those stats never made much sense to me either. Also you have 12 chapters guy. Most serious SH users don’t read a story until at least 50 chapters have been posted. Write some more and be concerned if you haven’t gotten more readers not that...

Ouran host club? FMC so reverse harem. And it’s a rom-com. I wouldn’t call it good but it’s okay if a little cliche.

Well first off we can’t give a rating without a post. Moving on from that without knowing more about what the story is about I can’t give any real judgements about the cover. I will say it does look interesting but without context I can’t give a real evaluation.

They already mentioned it but sound can be cancelled out if you invert the amplitude basically causing the soundwave to flitter out. Discordant noise is also a good idea like a louder version of jazz or maybe something extra loud like an airplane engine or a bass speaker. Also look into the...

I find the fact you don’t have any backups at all besides whats posted extremely suspicious. You didn’t save one anywhere else?

The mouse isn’t as trigger happy as say the Japanese company that shall not be named that owns the IP for the red plumber the boy in the green tunic and the monster fighting game, but I would say unless it’s a fan fiction where you’re writing a fan fiction about Star Wars you should be fine...

Dolores Umbridge is definitely up there. She’s evil but not kill babies evil. She’s institutional evil the evil that exists because of bureaucracy and sycophancy. There’s Joker for the pure psychopathy. But there’s also guys like Hannibal Lector, Norman Bates from Psycho, or Patrick Bateman...

Write out your plot line in bulleted points try to clump them together into logical groups.

“Eyes are the windows to the soul.” Yakusu is right. Take your MC’s character traits do a deep dive on what colors mean in various cultures and throughout history and match what your MC is like characterwise to the colors. Just two is limiting but you can use light from the environment to change...

Blue and gray

Honestly I think complaints about passive/active voice are bullish!t. I’ve been told by teachers and professors for years that I write in the passive voice too much but I don’t see the difference.

Okay first off you need to change the name of the world. Avalorn? Seriously? I tried to type it in and autocorrect automatically changed it to Avalon. You know that mystical realm related to the King Arthur myth? You added a single letter. Very Original. Alaric is okay and falls into the...

Honestly not a bad idea but the not remembering anything is kinda a deal breaker. It could also be horror with someone remembering everything just imagine dozens or hundreds of years of collective memory. It could drive anybody insane. Unless it’s only a short story, I don’t think the not...

Not an author just a long time reader so my opinion might not hold the same weight. In my experience people who post more than one story at a time fall into a couple categories. One either they are a very talented writer who successfully writes multiple stories and keeps them updated reliably...

Then I’d take a look at your writing before posting or get a proofreader or editor to read your stuff before posting it.