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I got to 900 I don’t think I missed any words cause I didn’t loose focus and try to fill in any blanks. It was pretty difficult though I don’t think I could have done it for long. I’d say I can read actual books around 450 wpm maybe more. I remember that I reread The Lightning Thief by Rick...

Don’t know how many chapter you have but it might be worth it. If you have at least 50 chapters maybe try with twenty. Do a grammatical/editorial overhaul and try reformatting it. If the readers before the new version then continue and write your chapters that way going forwards if they don’t...

It all depends. As a first chapter you want to draw people in, however, if you go to long it can get to cluttered. I guess all I can say is context matters if someone comments after reading the chapter that it’s too long you might want to give the chapter to an editor to doublecheck it. If it’s...

This is a weird one. Are you calling the person hit roadkill?

You’re an idiot. You’ve posted five chapters of ONE story you aren’t Tolkien. Especially since you posted three a few months ago and two within the last few days. You need consistent uploads to generate readers. Also a lot of longtime and consistent users of Scribblehub don’t start reading...

Breathe in and out. In for four hold for four out for four hold for four.

I mean it’s an idea. If you want to have a villain as the protagonist as an anti villain then you’re going to have to walk a very thin line. If they’re killing people who are corrupt in order to better the city or world then thats not villain thats anti hero which isnt what you’re going for. I’d...

You could make the second one I Became a Tentacle Monster and drop the rest but it’s not really necessary. The other ones I mentioned have a : where it seems like they could drop what comes after the : and still make sense. Yours is pretty short compared to Kitsuna.

Also don’t make it too long. There’s this story on here called On Astral Tides: From Humble Freelancer To Astral Emperor. See the problem? It’s too long it’s not concise what’s wrong with On Astral Tides? Or another story I read on here called My dungeon life: rise of the slave harem. Same...

Focus on one project and at bare minimum write a very through outline with plot points and an ending before even thinking of starting something new. You do not want to end up like some authors on this site with half a dozen or more stories going simultaneously anywhere from 50-100 chapters long...

There’s this author Whatsawhizzer he has two stories World of Women and Man of the House if you want examples of an inverted world you can read those. I mostly just read his isekai dungeon girls fic. If you want some inspiration for ideas or what not to do starting there maybe a good shot. A lot...

So utopian socialism?

If you’re a new author and it’s your first story I would say that you need to release chapters consistently especially for the first 50-100 chapters after that you can slow it down a little or do mass releases of several chapters once a week. Eldoria does have some good advice. I would also say...

Plot holes. Bad grammar and punctuation annoys the cr@p out of me. MC getting too strong too quickly. Like a system story where the MC gets really strong really quickly and the author can’t create realistic challenges for the MC to drive the narrative forward.

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My advice would be to look at other people’s writing for help. See how they write dialogue and try to copy that. I will say unless you’re trying to write a screenplay or a script then don’t write like your example. Tanenter, Yamao, and their other classmates sat down in their seats in the...

Depends on the number of reviews if it’s on a few then no I won’t read unless I like the excerpt or the tags. If it’s more than 50+ reviews then I know that it has a broad appeal.

Winter. But I grew up in Alaska so it’s either winter or a northern summer

Dude seriously I wanted to help you but seriously the just the first one is so long. Okay checked the next couple not as long but seriously too long. Blerbs dude blerbs especially since you're asking for people for their opinion on 17. Summarize try again with fewer and you might actually get...