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  1. servo

    What would your relationship with your MC be like if they were alive?

    I would be their best friend, even with my antagonist because I understand them very well, I don't judge them because I know why they are like this
  2. servo

    I create book covers

    Being wary doesn’t warrant bullying. Maybe people’s sense of right and wrong is so off that they confuse caution with mockery, or perhaps writing novels has made them delusional. And as for calling him a ‘scammer,’ I never saw him ask for money in any post
  3. servo

    I create book covers

    I did not know , SH forums were full of bullies and rude people he offered something instead of asking genuine question people start bullying for no reason Even if you want to criticize be constructive not a bully
  4. servo

    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    No problem take your time
  5. servo

    I need feedback on my web novel

    This advise even helped me
  6. servo

    First time Scribbler. Does my Story Have a Chance?

    Great — I’ll also give it a proper read and leave a review. lets stick together yes I use same username over there as well Servo and the name of Novel is also same, I have put your story on reading list and will give a proper read
  7. servo

    First time Scribbler. Does my Story Have a Chance?

    @Eternauta86 I am also writing an epic high fantasy and I am also posting on RR . Just started out so don't know how this will go, but something tells me we should totally be friends Good Luck
  8. servo

    One dialogue chapter

    Hey Everyone, Well its very simple you just simply post one dialogue from the latest chapter of your novel and link the chapter Let me start with an example "An angel," the word echoed in his skull. "I’m looking at an angel." Epics of Tarronia: Fire & shadow , Chapter 3 It could be anything...
  9. servo

    What is the premise of your story in a prompt that readers can understand your story?

    There are a few points that define my story "People are gray , not black and white. They have a reason for what they are" "People don't change overnight, if they did there would be no conflict in the world" "Destiny is pre determined only when you accept it as it is" Bonds are born from...
  10. servo

    Help please?

    I read Torian, and I feel the balance between dialogue and exposition could use some work. Chapter 2 felt like an extension of Chapter 1 — nothing much happens, so it loses momentum. Chapter 3 finally picks up, but by that time the reader’s already starting to lose interest. My suggestion...
  11. servo

    What's your longest record of experiencing writer's block that made your novels go on hiatus?

    have to have one yet , stories have been compiling for more than 18 years now , its time to write them
  12. servo

    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    Here you go — one last time, major rewrites. Epics of Tarronia: Fire & Shadow You can skip the Interlude and read chapter 1,2 and 3— you’ve already read the interlude. Thanks again, Servo
  13. servo

    Deleting and Making same novel again

    Hi everyone, Last week I published my first-ever novel, but after reviewing the start, I realized it lacked strong hooks. I’ve since rewritten the first two chapters and now feel the story would benefit from a fresh start. I’ve only uploaded three chapters so far, so I’m considering deleting...
  14. servo

    I'll rate your cover

  15. servo

    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    That is very kind of you
  16. servo

    [CLOSED] No one wants to review your story? Here I am!

    Well that's a fair point. Hope u can enjoy stories again
  17. servo

    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    First, thanks a lot for your time, and I really appreciate the kind of work you’re doing. I totally agree with your critique. I think I simply jumped the gun with the review; I should have posted more chapters before asking for your feedback. I already have 21 chapters written, but the problem...
  18. servo

    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Nice one I think first let me uplaod a few chapter than lets go for the ride
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