I need an opinion on a particular scene that includes action and interaction between characters. I would appreciate it if you tell me what you felt while reading, only your feeling not feedback. Thanks
Lol, I can recount countless incidents. Like when my heart dropped as I saw a demon sitting beside me, but then I realised those are the clothes that I didn't fold.
Definitely will post. Thank you.
Hey, sorry to bother you again, I decided to re-read my favourite novels and learn what they did and apply them.
Does this have its own style? Or is it still reading like a draft version? I would really appreciate it if you could just take a look.
Black and bright colors always go well; if you include a black character with black clothes, it might just look like a person-shaped void walking if you want that, then black and black is great. This is my opinion.
still the same reasons, but trying to fix what I wrote has kind of pushed me into a loop? I re-write-> upload ->re-write, and the cycle repeats. Idk if why this is specifically affecting me. idk i am not good at explaining.