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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    It means it is for me. I want to see what you cooked.
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    Definitely, I was about to read it but stalled as my mood was down today.
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    Thank you for reading :)
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    Okay, ig i should've pasted the whole chapter, my bad.
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    Does that mean the whole action block with zerra was blurred?
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    And the action?
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    I need an opinion on a particular scene that includes action and interaction between characters. I would appreciate it if you tell me what you felt while reading, only your feeling not feedback. Thanks
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    How to move forward?

    Thank you, I might contact you soon. :)
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    How to move forward?

    Lol, I can recount countless incidents. Like when my heart dropped as I saw a demon sitting beside me, but then I realised those are the clothes that I didn't fold. Definitely will post. Thank you.
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    How to move forward?

    Thank you, man, I didn't expect you to find the links for me. I am more interested in building horror atmosphere for now.
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    How to move forward?

    That's actually a good idea, I'll try watching horror videos when I am writing horror.
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    How to move forward?

    Every now and then i do that, but sometimes it kind of disturbs if i am writing.
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    Revised chapter 1 and synopsis.

    Hey, sorry to bother you again, I decided to re-read my favourite novels and learn what they did and apply them. Does this have its own style? Or is it still reading like a draft version? I would really appreciate it if you could just take a look.
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    Clearly I have a pattern…

    Black and bright colors always go well; if you include a black character with black clothes, it might just look like a person-shaped void walking if you want that, then black and black is great. This is my opinion.
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    How to move forward?

    Thanks, ig i stop taking every single feedback seriously. No, no, I am from a land with tons of spices.
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    How to move forward?

    huh...never thought about this matter in this way. Ig I'll just take a day or two off and think about this. Thank you, L1
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    How to move forward?

    sarcasm :blob_sweat:
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    How to move forward?

    I am already drinking a poison called sting, soon, my piss will start looking Red and orange like lava.
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    How to move forward?

    still the same reasons, but trying to fix what I wrote has kind of pushed me into a loop? I re-write-> upload ->re-write, and the cycle repeats. Idk if why this is specifically affecting me. idk i am not good at explaining.
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    How to move forward?

    Originally, it started as a way to show my world and story, also fixing my attention span.
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