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    The Ascendants: Early Years — Trial begins scene : New illustration

    Aidan stood over him, shaking his head in mock pity. "You’re all talk. Look at you now—lying in the dirt like a worm." He grabbed a fistful of Artreus’s shirt, yanking him up so their faces were inches apart. His red eyes glowed with pure contempt. "You think you can beat me just because...
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    I don't use AI Art, I have my own art skills! Whoa! It's as beautiful as a sunflower. It reminds me of Rafaela, my character. I like that part of the sentence, it's clear and understandable. I want to directly convey that Artreus or Aidan is angry, like when I wrote, "His expression twisted...
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Thank you for your comment, bro! I really appreciate it. Anyway, here’s another illustration to give a clearer picture of my novel. Meet Arthur and Guinevere!
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Sorry to see that, my attitude... If they don’t like my writing, I get that it might be hard to understand sometimes. But hey, maybe after finishing my novel, I’ll do a manhwa version bring the story to life in a different way! It really depends on my free time, though. A manhwa takes a long...
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    I know how to use "em-dashes" my bro You can use it too, it depends how to use it Em-dashes (—) Like — To show interruptions or sudden shifts in thought, To replace commas for a stronger pause or dramatic effect
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Are you saying they don't like my novel? When I released my full volume? Well, gotta keep it professional, bro. Just stay positive. Some people will be happy, and some might not, but that’s just how it goes. I don’t want to leave them hanging, though... it really depends on them, or if they...
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    I see... I think I’ll take your advice. Hmm... maybe I’ll release 1 to 3 chapters after my exam week! Anyway, what do you think of my character art? =D The one in blue is Artreus, red is Aidan, and purple is Mikael!
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Thank you for your feedback and comment! Mind if I ask, what’s wrong with using em dashes? A lot of webnovels, like Shadow Slave and Dragon Genesis: I Can Create Dragons, use them too. Is it really wrong to use them?
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    How the hell are my replies considered ai-generated? Maybe you didn’t fully understand the words I used — or maybe it’s the em dashes or something?
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Hey guys! Whoa, I didn’t expect to see your replies here, what a nice surprise! I’m really glad you’re reading my novel. I’ve been working on releasing Volume 2 in the next 2 to 4 months. If you’re interested, feel free to check out the illustrations from Volume 1 too! If you think my novel is...
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    Volume 1 Released! | The Ascendants: Early Year

    Hey everyone! I’m excited to share that Volume 1 of my novel “The Ascendants: Early Years” is now officially published! This story has been my passion project, and I’ve spent the past 3 to 5 months working hard on revisions and improvements—grinding through scenes on both my phone and laptop...
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    New Novel - Any feedback. The Ascendants: Early Years – Lightning, Fire, Shadows… and Brotherhood

    Thanks for the follow-up, I appreciate it a lot. And honestly, no worries! AI stuff, It’s everywhere now, and I’ve read stories where the tone just feels... off. So I’m actually glad you took the time to clarify. I know my writing still has a long way to go, and I’m not afraid to admit that...
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    New Novel - Any feedback. The Ascendants: Early Years – Lightning, Fire, Shadows… and Brotherhood

    Thank you for your feedback! It honestly makes me happy knowing someone took the time to read and respond to my story. I really appreciate your thoughts. I understand where you're coming from. You probably have a lot of experience as both a writer and reader, while I’m still an amateur...
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    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Synopsis In the peaceful town of Ozamian, young Artreus dreams of becoming the strongest knight, inspired by his older brother, Arthur Reigns. But his life is shattered when the Demon King Abaddon attacks their town, killing his mother and leaving a trail of devastation. Determined to seek...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1528128/the-ascendants-early-years Please check out mine, please leave a review or comment.
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    New Novel - Any feedback. The Ascendants: Early Years – Lightning, Fire, Shadows… and Brotherhood

    Hello guys! I’ve been working hard revising and improving my novel “The Ascendants: Early Years”, and I’m hoping to get your honest feedback and thoughts on it! This is a story about three young boys who are destined to become legends, trained by a mysterious master and thrown into a world...
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    I'll evaluate new writers!

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1528128/the-ascendants-early-years/ I hope you'll like it, please leave it a review or comments. Thank you!:blob_evil_two:
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    New Novel - Any feedback. The Ascendants: Early Years – Lightning, Fire, Shadows… and Brotherhood

    Hello guys! I’ve been working hard revising and improving my novel “The Ascendants: Early Years”, and I’m hoping to get your honest feedback and thoughts on it! This is a story about three young boys who are destined to become legends, trained by a mysterious master and thrown into a world...
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