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"If you try hard enough you'll make it."

The only forgiving aspect I can think of is if the name of the country/continent (depending on how heavy the incest elements are) is something like Alabamia, Alabamium or anything that starts with Alabam- something. Other than that, its a complete no for me as an idea, sorry, not the types of...

Damn, you keep hammering ain't you? I don't want to step into this... walk?...write...? Fck it you know what I mean, but he might have just started writing out of passion and while he does it for himself he might want to genuinely improve. Idk him, you don't know him, hell most likely he doesn't...

I think, I am NOT sure, that you didn't like the first three chapters of the story. It's only an inclination though... On another note, what does ARG stand for?

"The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear, and the oldest and strongest kind of fear is fear of the unknown" You know who's quote this is. The best thing you can do for horror is to reveal as little about them as possible, but if you HAVE to and there is no other way, depending on...

Different uses, different application.

I am currently sitting at 1 chapter a day at 1,5k words and would like to push it a bit further to reach the 2k mark and be able to write 'two chapters' by cutting it in half. Starting from only 600 words a day, I think I've progressed smoothly. You' get there. Just give yourself time and don't...

Damn its weird reading the same guy talking to himself...

Bruh...

Honestly, I write better when I'm sick. Having headaches daily (or at least used to have when I was younger) helps build endurance. Now when it comes down to fevers and such they simply remove all the unnecessary thought since, wow, I'm sick so I don't have to worry about them. My brightest...

Humans.

I'm sorry but is the name up for a change? As someone who is coming from League of Legends "Nigel" brings something else into my dirty mind with so many times I've seen it being... incorrectly used to replace another similar word.

Have you returned yet? It's been an entire day. And as for the weapon, I guess Kama? Haven't seen them used before.

This is very sad, but even more so scary. If some of the greatest masterpieces out there couldn't be successful then what chances do we have? Flip a coin and pray? I want to strongly disagree but I can't find a real argument against that take.

As crazy as it sounds, this isn't the right place to find it. I'm guessing you are a new author, and as one, you've surely been through a phase of constantly thinking about your book and only that. Most people in this thread fall into this category, and to an extend this makes everyone else's...

Nah, still too short. Go big or go home as they say. If it's below a chapter's length don't even bother posting.

Honesty have to agree with my best friend SailusGebel on this one. I feel like something is missing for me to get interested. Also, question, with the tiger-riding warriors. How does that work under the sea? Am I misunderstanding something with this one?

There's a difference between "A song of Ice and Fire" and "The adventures of the last son of X family goes and does Y with his worse skill that actually is op but only realized it after he got married to the worst woman on the entire whole world. [litRPG]." Yes its not something inherently...

Every story happened because the author said so, but I'm sure you didn't mean you hates stories—more so in the magic system spectrum. You can always find whatever excuse to explain literally anything. Your limit is only your imagination and your bullshity ability out of a situation. However...

Cultivation is the one that requires the least amount of brain power to do. You just find a few cool names put them in order, find an excuse to give multiple stages between each of the names and done. That's as lazy a magic system can get unoriginal purposeless (not that mine fairs any better).